|Reviews for The Amazing Saiyaman|
| Shianthi Estrada chapter 1 . 11/14
I didn't like DBZ's Videl. I mean she was strong a determinated, but she was too meddlesome, arrogant and shameless for my taste (an many fanfics make her personality worst). When she knew the truth her arrogance died down and she became a good wife and mother in Dragon Ball Super (I loved DBS's Videl by the way)
Everything eneded up well and Videl and Gohan made a great couple but that doesn't mean that her actitut with him was a healthy one (she stalked him once, for gods sake)
Gohan is one of the many DBZ characters that wasn't use to his/her full potential and I think pairing him with Erasa was something refreshing
I hoped you didn't take those insults seriously and if you finish to finish this fanfic someday, I'll be happy
| anonymous chapter 4 . 12/29/2016
Are you ever gonna finish it
| WeylandCorp 4 chapter 4 . 9/8/2016
| blkrock31 chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
I liked this fanfic bout when I read all Gohan and Videl bitching and crying make me love it please update show theses retards that you can't and wouldn't be intimated
Ps g/v fans aka retards you can clearly see that Gohan and Esara name are in parenthesis meaning they are the coning couple everyone knows that so way are you whiny like a brunch of retards so you cowards like to logout and flames this story you have unleashed a firestorm me and freands will be searching and reporting EVERY g/v fanfic with sexual content there alot of then so game on
| gabelou1991 chapter 4 . 5/18/2015
J'aime cette histoire même sic'est une Gohan / Erasa , vc'est bien évrit .
| RapingBagels chapter 4 . 4/26/2015
You should update soon because despite all the hate your getting its actually a pretty good story
| LegendOfTomorrow chapter 4 . 4/18/2015
Yeah, you got me hooked now!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
Just shut the fuck up gohan and Videl fans you just can't be happy that gohan is paired with someone else majority of the fanfics are g/v so go read that instead of acting like a bunch of crybaby children I like the g/v pairing in the anime and manga but not in all fan fictions authors should think of pairing gohan with other characters so there is a variety even I actually think erasa lime or zangya would be perfect for gohan lol
| Goldenfightergirl chapter 4 . 2/26/2015
I'm beginning to love Gohan and Erasa pairings. So when is your next update?
| Ky111 chapter 4 . 12/25/2014
Great story, it's so hard to find Gohan and Erasa pairings which I think is a much better match.
I like the whole Gohan taking charge of his life and doing what he wants not what someone else is pushing/forcing him to do, I also like that he's keeping up his training (even though this doesn't seem to be a big point for the story, always thought Gohan should of become a SS4, that would of been so bad ass plus maintained his status as the strongest. So terrible the depth he fell between the Cell and High school saga's, Ultimate was cool in Buu saga but ended terribly like how was Gohan not apart of the final fight but instead designated lead cheerleader, I mean come on Vegeta was there [which was cool he deserved to be there and deserved to be stronger than he was that was a rip how far behind Goku he fell] and even that fool Hercule was there but not Gohan).
Anyway rambling great work and looking forward to seeing more.
| SaintMichael95 chapter 4 . 8/20/2014
Wow, that was awesome! I love how Gohan and Erasa connect. Its like they can read each other really well. Terrific story and I cant wait for more! I hope you dont abandon it as its been a couple months since the last update.. :'(
| angry chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
You bastard. Why have you got Videl in your list of characters? I don't want to find UTTER SHIT like this because you don't know what category your ''story''(i.e pile of dog shit) belongs in!
This ''pairing'' is RETARDED and would never work. You have Gohan COMPLETELY OOC but then, that's a given, considering the ludicrous pairing. There's absolutely no point to ANYTHING you write.
Stop wasting everyone's time, including your own, and find something better to do with your life.
Your lemons also suck BIG TIME.
You should just give up; you can't write.
Seriously, you need to stop polluting the website with rubbish like this. It's embarrassing. YOU'RE embarrassing.
You obviously have a thing for average-looking, bubble-headed, short-haired blonde girls, considering how you are obviously taken with this slut Erasa.
So, why don't you go out and get a girl who fits that description, and stop trying live out your fantasies through Gohan. Stop pairing him with that slut because it does not work. He belongs with Videl all the way.
Don't like it? Tough. That's what Akira Toriyama decided and canon is CANON.
It doesn't matter what you imagine.
Erasa's just an insignificant filler character and, if you'll wrack your head and think back to the series, he doesn't show ANY interest in her even when she throws herself at him.
You may as well write GohanXSharpener.
Heck, . At least has some sort of actual role to play in the series, dumbass.
I've a good mind to report this on the grounds of your crappy, gratuitous ''lemons''.
| You're sickening chapter 2 . 7/13/2014
I am reporting this story, it's rubbish
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
u left this shit on standby, bitch,. so u can sit on your hole, dumb ass. cliff hangers r never a good thing bitch!
Gohan X Harem : add Graphic sex Scene Actoin.
| thebehr247 chapter 4 . 6/29/2014
Just found your story, but I absolutely love it. Hope to see more soon.