Reviews for Letting Off Some Steam
1000 Year Lore Lover chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
Heh, a dominate Jake. That scene... *whew* *then wipe the sweat off on the forehead* Good.
Cody Furlong chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
Super hot! Keep up the great work!
D. Raines chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
I felt like leaving a review for you, considering you're a real good friend and you want feedback. So here it is:

This has got to be, hands down, the hottest hands-free, non-penetrative Jake/Chance lemon I've ever read. And that reference to Nikko's comic was so rich.

I personally find it hard to believe that this is your first J/C sex scene, you have perfect descriptions, and errors are very few. Without a doubt, this can easily rival many scenes written by the most veteran writers.

I think you may have gotten me into musk with this :). Regardless, I sure hope your next scene will be as good as this one. The statement that I have no more concrit after you corrected the spacing is no lie.

Great job, buddy!