|Reviews for Deathstroke the Terminator|
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/5/2014
i just have to say, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE HOW CHUMMY SLADE IS! :D
Slade from the show always came off to me as that jerk-uncle who was basically putting the kids through hell cause it was how he showed it cared... like he wouldn't kill them, just drive them through the mud, then sit back with a cigar and scotch laughing about how they fumbled and how they finally got it right... everything he did seemed like a test, that in the end was for their own good, even if he was the villain... not saying he was 'good' or anything, just that his motives always seemed screwy, like he was happy they beat him and felt proud, and probably responsible, when they beat someone harder, like Trigon :P
so it totally fits in my head that he's just sitting back, giggling, and wanting to join in all the festivies, like these are his kids and he's so happy to see them growing up (and screwing up) and enjoying the show... they're his little pet-project and he likes watching the results...
suppose he always came off more 'neutral' then downright evil, Deathstroke (this version more then strictly comics) TOTALLY did not give that vibe, so its funny to see both...
but seriously, Slade, group-hug... he must be grinning so wide behind his mask XD
| The Cretin chapter 18 . 9/1/2014
This chap seemed a little more subdued here. I liked it. As always, I love that penchant for detail you have.
Sorry I've been gone. Things are difficult right now.
| Nitebreaker chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
Interesting...I'd like to see more of this story, and in particular, Deathstroke's role in it. Also Terra's. Following and favoriting.
| Johnsmythe58 chapter 22 . 8/24/2014
I'm sorry that lost the inspiration. I hope you'll be able to get it back one day and continue doing what you love. I'm not much of a writer, but I can tell you have a ton of talent. Not many people can write like you can. Best of luck for the future.
| iamking chapter 22 . 8/13/2014
Should put a warning at the begining of the story.
| Kestrel893 chapter 22 . 8/10/2014
It's disappointing that you lost the inspiration. I wish you the best of luck in the future.
And it would be freaking awesome if you do decide to start up the story again.
| Guest chapter 22 . 8/8/2014
Waaaaaaaaaah I'm crying. your making me cry. I'm not supposed i cry. ugh emotions. i'm gonna miss u force. i ish u the best.
| Guest chapter 21 . 8/6/2014
please update soon and will the justice league be more involved
| finchelshipper2 chapter 21 . 8/5/2014
I really like your story, the writing is really good. Just wondering, do you not write robstar anymore? They just kind of...vanished from the story. You haven't done a scene with just the two of them in awhile. I was just curious because I like Beastboy and Raven, but I'm not really a fan of reading them in fanfiction, So I might not continue reading. But I really do think you're a talented writer! :)
| The Cretin chapter 17 . 7/25/2014
Nice little jousting at the beginning. I like it.
Now Raven's got two Terras to worry about...and damn...they can't take a hint. She better circle the wagons.
Love the part about Trigon's residual evil. Very creative.
Hope to read more.
| The Cretin chapter 16 . 7/23/2014
Yeah they should watch their backs. With a magnifying glass. It's Slade Wilson. In all of DC, the only people I can imagine mentally going toe-to-toe with him are Batman and Joker...though I long for Slade to beat Batman.
It will be interesting to see what happens next. Things are looking up for Cyborg...who I imagine will never be fully understood to the depths of his inner pain.
Glad to see the CCC are working things out. Raven says jump, BB's like "How high" XD Just kiddin. Seriously, you captured the trepidation that she would feel as well as the hesitation on certain things. Like calling her "babe" in public and the tabloids and all that.
Loved Slade's/Deathstroke's characterization. Hope to read more soon.
| MrRayney chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
Lo se, te debo review en dos de tus historias que actualmente estas en progreso, pero se que a ti no te gusta un simple "buen trabajo" o "sigue asi", por lo que tengo que pensar muy bien el comentario que te dejare para que sea mas elaborado.
Sobre esta historia, me gusto el comienzo, me gusto la forma en la que tele transportaste a los Titanes a la dimensión de los comics y los cambios de apariencia que les distes me gusto, Robin ahora Nightwing si que debe disfrutar de la apariencia de Starfire, al igual que la de Chico Bestia por la de Raven.
Que Slade matara a sus contra partes si que fue una sorpresa para los Titanes, pero es Deathstroke alguien mucho peor y los Titanes van a tener que lidiar contra el...les deseo suerte.
Oye...¿No te importa que te comente en tus historias ya terminadas? Se que no tendría algún caso, pero simplemente me gustan tus historias y si las hubiera leído cuando estaban en progreso (seriamente me hubiera gustado leer la primera version de Carved in Stone) y hubiera sabido que sabes español las hubiera comentado, cosa que quiero hacer porque siempre he tenido cosas que decir de esas historias.
| Alec33 chapter 21 . 7/18/2014
Great story! Can't wait to see what happens with the Terras'
| The Cretin chapter 15 . 7/10/2014
Well...this does shake the foundations (no pun intended Terra fans). The characterization is strong. I like this "Raven opening up more" angle. Always knew Gar was good for her. ;)
The Unholy Alliance has been sealed. Not since Saruman and Sauron have two evils been linked in such a way. However: "Evil turns upon itself"- Dragonlance. It will be interesting to see how long the alliance holds.
Now we're in for it. The two Terras have met. It will be interesting to see how that plays out as well. Will they realize that letting Gar go is for the better? Or will they end up following a different path?
As always you rock.
| FF8cerberus chapter 20 . 7/9/2014
Nice chapter. Not too surprised about the marriage, but a little on how it was finalized. Glad these two are together. Now they need to prepare for another battle. Luck has been on their side so far. Hope it gets them through this next ordeal.