|Reviews for Narration Irritation|
| ChiaSeedsA chapter 1 . 11/29/2020
| Murkatroyd chapter 1 . 5/31/2020
I can't remember the last time I laughed the entire way through a story. This was a great, unique idea for a fic. Well done.
| xThomas2 chapter 1 . 2/2/2019
| BillBrink chapter 1 . 8/22/2017
Were you doin' weed when you wrote this? This gets funnier with every paragraph. You are demented. Too good. Now I have to read the other too in the series.
| jon reeve chapter 1 . 2/15/2017
/That was a terrible thing to do to young Harry. ;)
| 1066wthec chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
thought togas were roman?
carry on please?!1
| DylanL chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
lol you dont see many fourth wall breaks in stories except for in author notes and disclaimers. loved the story but like harry, i wish i could have seen tonks' naked body.
| Noder chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
This was really good :D Keep up the good work! You made me laugh really hard!
| flyster chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
You are fucking awesome jajajajajajajaj
| Valhyre chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
Completely fantastic, it took me a while to realize how to read it(cuz i'm dumb) but once i got it couldn't stop laughing.
| sena chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
very nice... you have a fantastic sense of humour.
As for continuing... I think not. The ending is perfect as it is right now. Leave it there!
| The Tantalus Complex chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
Ok, you got me. That was hysterical. I loved the direction and pace you took the story. You can either leave it a one-shot, or you can make more chapters dealing with Harry's terrible frustration with the narrator's timing. Both options would be great.