Reviews for MASK Movie: Script Excerpt 4
FearlessFreep chapter 1 . 5/9/2018
Unfortunately I have to agree with the previous reviewer in that the dialogue here relies heavily on exposition.

I wholeheartedly applaud your efforts as I've experienced the personal hell of writing scripts, but this adaptation didn't do it for me. For instance, it makes zero sense for Bruce Sato, let alone the other MASK agents, to ever use a gun.
Bogdan Sunder chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
Totally wooden dialogue. Overstuffed with foreshadowing and forced exposition, this scene doesn'T thrill me at all. There's just no natural flow to it. Sorry, to me, this is a miss.
Vampireking40 chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
Good start to a great movie. I can vision this entire event on screen.
Heart of the Demons chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
Way to go, Dusty! Now M.A.S.K. will surely grow into a force for good.
susan chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
is buddy hawkes going to be in it ? the suppense it geting to me .
it's a good read and I hope they do put out a m.a.s.k. movie