Love the bit with Riza and Roy at the office, but ow that ending hurt. Much enjoy!

This was painful to read. Very well done.

Wow. You nailed Al's personality in such a vivid way.

ok so I missed reviewing the first chapter, but that's because It's so good I wanted to read more! Now I'm forcing myself to stop and review so you know how awesome this is. poor ed... he's all sad! but what can you expect when you say you got the idea from KawasakiTriple? haha

Oh my gosh! That was amazing. Believable and touching. I have tears in my eyes right now. You're a great writer.

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I.. this cant be the end. There is some talking the two of them need to do..

..I am sad. This fic was so awesome. I almost cried.

OH MY GOSH THE TABLES HAVE TURNED

I kinda hate Al. Its supposed to be Ed dying , not Al! For once, Damn you, Alphonse! Love ya Miss Puppet.
Mesh. It's a cute ending. Wasn't expecting the plot twist. :)
Murr. :o

Well, that sure was a plot twist. I didn't think Al would do that. I'm crying! It's so sad. Is it really the end?

Oh my god. ;-; This story is so sad yet beautiful. I can't wait to see what happens next!

As well written as this is, I think it might be a good idea to get an editor. Just to fix tiny mistakes like using All instead of Al and rather instead of farther. You don't have to though, and if you don't, it's still a great story.

Oh my god poor Al. ;-; Still reading! .u.

I really like this so far. Ed seems very in character, and I love how well written this is. I'll read the rest later. Keep it up!

Awe, poor Al. He's so confused. Poor Ed, being all depressed and all. Please update soon, I really want to know what happens next!

Oooh. Ed angst.

For some reason, I am starting to want to maim Al. He's just making Edward worst.

Ignore my previous 2 reviews. My phone was drunk. XD