konoha sucks

Gracias por compartir esta historia, estuvo excelente... no sé si todavía escribas pero aquí tienes otra seguidora... un beso y un abrazo :'3 que estés bien ;')

This was amazing.

I'm not crying, you're crying. Good job on this story!

Brutal, but written well. A real tearjerker.

ouch

This was so fantastic and not at all what I expected. Great job!

And that was beautiful.

Thank you so much for writing this masterpiece. It's brilliant, and I love how you managed to weave in Hinata's story. Thank you so much for sharing this. I greatly enjoyed it.

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Jari

TAT

A well done story. This was quite sad to read. There was a lot of emotion in this story with Sasuke's thoughts on certain things as well as how he sees Konoha and the sacrifice that Naruto made. It was well done in putting a lot of detail to what happened in the present and having flashbacks to help understand the backstory of how they got to the present. Interesting plot and liked how Sasuke was trying to find his own peace and in the end did. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

Sad. Very, very sad. I adore how very Sasuke like Sasukes thinking process is here. I also like how you made it pretty much merge with Naruto thought process at the end there.

Small, poignant, and sad. I love it.

This story had a quiet sadness to it that drew me in, I definitely enjoyed reading this and considering how much I enjoyed this as well as Uzumaki, I should probably check out your other stories.

The thing I liked best about the story was Sasuke and Hinata's friendship. There's an earnestness, an acceptance in how they interact that's missing from Sasuke's other relationships. Kakashi's tied to the past, Sakura's conflicted, Tsunade's obstructive. It's like she (almost) took Naruto's place in that regard.

The story's good: good technical writing, good use of present tense (most of the time I feel that it's sort of pretentious to use it, but here it works) and nice interactions. I felt like some parts of the story weren't as coherent (for one, the passage of time. When did Sasuke return to the village? Another would be why the Nine-Tails' chakra is so damaging when it wasn't before unless Naruto entered the four tail state), but were minor "flaws" that didn't detract from the story quality.

The main thing I got from it was a hollow, empty feeling. Not sadness, not despair, just emptiness. If that's the tone you wanted to convey by showing Sasuke going through the motions, decaying after Naruto's death (when he mentioned someone dying, I thought he killed Naruto), then good job on that. If you didn't? I don't know, then. Either way, thanks for sharing.

... This is... Intense. It really is well done. You made the story so much deeper than so few words would imply. Well done.

Wow. I mean, how am I supposed to describe this? It's great. Positively great. My only real comment on it would be that the feels are real.