Reviews for Can't
dopeysac chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
Omg! Such a sad and beautiful story.
The-KLF chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
This is a really powerful story, beautifully written as always.
non chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
In the words of Richard Castle: Don't be sorry, Polly.
Sometimes the longing has more beauty than the destination. Their struggle is — yes, I'm using that word — fun to read, too. Like in this 'Time Out' series of yours.
Hugggs to you (in case you need it)
alexmack32 chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
OMG I adored this holy crap it was perfect
supermandy77 chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
NO, don't be sorry! She's so broken in the early seasons that I don't think she could handle a real relationship with Castle. This is painful, but realistic had they given in to their physical desires early on. This is what they would have been about, as opposed to what they became by waiting.

I just want more in this universe now, though. So...please?
aussiecate chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Sob! Oh, that's so sad. Castle's the glue helping her from shattering whilst he's barely able to stop himself breaking apart, double sob!

Something happy next time perhaps?
Cora Clavia chapter 1 . 4/20/2014

Manxkid chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
I think it is more realistic than the actual ending - well written
kateziva chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
This was so beautiful! Good job :)
GT500RonSmith chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
I don't suppose they were ready to make a go of it then, but I love that you let them comfort each other. It was really sweet.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
Oh are, and forever will be, my favorite ff author!
Ky03elk chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
Ohhh, ohhhhh this hurt my little heart in all sorts of ways, wonderfully destroyed me as much as them.
thank you
3rdfah chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
I absolutely love how you turn this simple act of cleaning Kate's hands and face into a worship, a simple expression of how much he loves this incredible woman.
createaloha chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
ridiculously great.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
that's a heartbreaker.
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