Reviews for Siblings
ilovesaiyukithemost chapter 6 . 8/13/2005
The sound of the fan hitting their heads is THWACK! It's a well-known fact!
endragh chapter 9 . 5/18/2005
this is really good i will probly read the rest of your fanfics

_ endragh _
missing link chapter 8 . 12/7/2002
if you this would be included in the series, everyone would think that somebody's having a girl to girl relationship! ahahahahahahahahA! next chappie...
missing link chapter 7 . 12/7/2002
yup, emerald and green are of the same color... and GOKU HAS A CRUSH! the boy finally reached manhood! AND he 18 years old! wow, talk about delay...
missing link chapter 6 . 12/7/2002
OMG! Maka is coming... run! hide! bring out the artillery!
missing link chapter 5 . 12/7/2002
waah... sanzo's alone... poor baby! hihihi.. anyway, what are those you-know-what-i-mean stuff? are they periods? i mean, they are female, right?
missing link chapter 4 . 12/7/2002
ohohoho- ohoho... if i was there i'd think that hakkai and miyuki, goku and misho are doing kinky sutff! well, they didn't! haha... gonna read next chappie... hm...
missing link chapter 3 . 12/7/2002
hakkai and miyuki in a private place! doing what? private things! whahahaha... anyway, it's not that lamE! it's okay! the plot is really good!
missing link chapter 2 . 12/7/2002
what will hakkai do? hmmm... interesting! gonna read on to the next chapter!
missing link chapter 1 . 12/7/2002
what are they laughing about, huh? i wanna know so i'm gonna read the next chappie now...
one-two-three chapter 6 . 11/21/2002
ARGH~!...plz continue the story!...i'm eager to knoe wat's gonna happen next~!..._
cool-kitsune chapter 3 . 10/26/2002
Hey, thanks for responding to my request! please continue your fic!
cool-kitsune chapter 2 . 10/25/2002
Yup... I really would love a longer chapter to add to the fun! But your story's great!
yumeneko chapter 2 . 10/24/2002
Kawaii plot - Looks sunny to me, unlike my other 'Hakkai has another sister' fics. Mines are usually dark and Yaoi. About your writing skills, you don't seem to have a clear skill. Why don't you try reading fics with the same plot as yours, check the way they write and try to combine the best traits they have. I'm sure you'll get better at this... if you need any help, feel free to contact me anytime -

~yumeneko/Hibiemi/Risuko
blinkie chapter 1 . 10/24/2002
_ is it finished? you left me hanging there! _

huggz,

blinkie