Reviews for Losing Your Memory |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The letter isn't Ianto's resignation, is it? Jack seemed a bit ooc for parts of that, but I love where this is going. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome update, |
![]() ![]() GREAT UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() Good. But I have a sneaking suspicion jack should open the other letter. Does it contain a resignation or clues where to find Ianto if Ianto is wrong about what Jack feels for him and Gwen? I know irs your story but I'm just sayin', a girls needs to keep her hopes up for a future Janto love fest-:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad Owen helped Jack see that there is still hope. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally love how Owen stands up for Ianto XD |
![]() ![]() I enjoyed the different letters and varying responses to them, even though Gwen's rather clueless. One small grammar concrit: in the 3rd paragraph Tosh is thinking about Jack's behaviour "considering that he had went to Ianto's..." should be "he had gone" or "he had been" otherwise get rid of the "had" and just say "went". |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yup, that's our Gwen. Self absorbed, conceited, always telling everyone how right she is, and how wrong they are. Then proving by actions just how wrong she is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think gwen is in for a rude awakening. she is so arrogant |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story! I am so happy you updated! :) Gwen is so stupid and delusional. I really don't like her. Can't wait for the next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for Gwen to have her bubble busted and jack to stop feeling sorry for himself and get up off his arse, find Ianto and make him fall in love with Jim all over again. At least I hope something like that is going to happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was good! I don't really see Gwen admitting all that the way she did, but it's your story and you can make the characters do what you want. I loved Owen's reaction and Tosh was good too. Hope to see more soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() :''( Poor Jack. He's going to get his Ianto back right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update Again soon! I love this fic! |