great story, please update!

the other galaxy world would work, but I'd want it to be a primary world, with a connection to an outpost in the avalon galaxy. i feel the story won't work well with a full withdrawal from the main galaxy. she had good ion and shield tech so she should do as the tollan and lanteans, and build a primary city under a shield with ground based ion defences, and high power beam weapon (think lagrantian) satellites in orbit of the planet and solar system.

I like the finding a new world in a new galaxy but I’m sad that the story stopped at this point :(

Oooooh did she shanghai the Tollan while they were primitive?

Why not use the sarcophagus to revive who can be revived?

Are you still writing as this is a really good story?

Very entertaining story. Unfortunately, it seems this has been left alone for quite some time. Hope you are ok and just don't have the time for this.

Wait what? I'm pretty sure the Bashtet knows that she don't want to be a scientist...What is this about lying and what not?

I hate the concept of grain-sized projectiles. They tend to be much more heavily affected by the environment, leading to really bad accuracy. They lack the mass to retain the kinetic energy through their flight and tend to bleed a lot of it into the atmosphere in the form of heat. They also lack the mass to transfer the kinetic energy they carrier into their target, and they either bounce, over-penetrate, or just create a tiny crater in the armor and nothing else.

I love the story. I hope you'll continue the story one day.

Please update this if you can. I am invested in your rewrite!

Vc vai continuar ou abandonou?

Nooooo I want to continue this but alasit was a nice read thank you

I apologize for repeating the same review my original version of the same review didn't come up at first and so I didn't think that it had actually posted even if I was told that it did post. Please don't be impatient with me. All I am trying to do is provide a positive/constructive criticism on the exploration of Alternate Dimensions/realities/earths/timelines other than that of the Stargate Franchise. For it would be interesting to see the main character exploring the alien lifeforms and technology earth human lifeforms and technology of other realities found within other random franchises outside of the stargate franchise fandom. With infinity of realities logically speaking there should also be a diversity of Infinity of home multiversal constants and laws of nature. This would actually take the following quote on the subject a bit further(httpswww. space As physicist and Nobel laureate Steven Weinberg told me on "Closer to Truththe source of all following interviews), "The word 'universe,' I suppose, should properly mean the whole thingeverything. But when we think of 'universe,' we sometimes use the word to mean just our Big Bang, the things we can see out to almost 14 billion light-years in all directions. And in this manner, it's reasonable to question: Is our universe unique? Are there multiple Big Bangs? Could there be multiple Big Bangs in different senses?What Triggered the Big Bang? It's Complicated (Op-EdWe started calling it a 'multiverse,meaning the entire ensemble of innumerable regions of disconnected space-time, said Andrei Linde, the Russian-American physicist now at Stanford. He developed the theory of "eternal chaotic inflation," which generates ever-increasing numbers of universes without end. Scientists created the neologism "multiverse," Linde continued, "because we found that what we had called 'the universe' can be divided into extremely large regions, which may have different laws of physics.

I hope I am not being to pushy I just wanted to provide examples of the infinite different rules for interdimensional travel beyond just the Stargate Franchise with the cascade failure when using a quantum mear. httpsarrow. fandom

httpsarrow. fandom

httpwhoniverse

httpstardis. fandom

httpstardis. fandom

httpsstargate. fandom

httpsen.m. wikipedia

httpsen.m. wikipedia

If I wasn't to pushy and you are still working on the story. Could you explore these other links since it seems to me that Lilith/maya could actually not only expand her imperial dominion to other galaxies with in the same universe she could actually if she perfects alternate ways to travel to alternate realities outside of the quantum mear to realities where cascade affect is actually not a factor with interdimensional travel.

I hope I am not being to pushy I just wanted to provide examples of the infinite different rules for interdimensional travel beyond just the Stargate Franchise with the cascade failure when using a quantum mear. httpsarrow. fandom

httpsarrow. fandom

httpwhoniverse

httpstardis. fandom

httpstardis. fandom

httpsstargate. fandom

httpsen.m. wikipedia

httpsen.m. wikipedia

If I wasn't to pushy and you are still working on the story. Could you explore these other links since it seems to me that Lilith/maya could actually not only expand her imperial dominion to other galaxies with in the same universe she could actually if she perfects alternate ways to travel to alternate realities outside of the quantum mear to realities where cascade affect is actually not a factor with interdimensional travel.