Reviews for Empress in the shadows reworked
mars.renan chapter 13 . 2/9
Vc vai continuar ou abandonou?
Firehelper chapter 13 . 11/23/2020
Nooooo I want to continue this but alasit was a nice read thank you
ConlonKeith chapter 5 . 8/9/2020
I apologize for repeating the same review my original version of the same review didn't come up at first and so I didn't think that it had actually posted even if I was told that it did post. Please don't be impatient with me. All I am trying to do is provide a positive/constructive criticism on the exploration of Alternate Dimensions/realities/earths/timelines other than that of the Stargate Franchise. For it would be interesting to see the main character exploring the alien lifeforms and technology earth human lifeforms and technology of other realities found within other random franchises outside of the stargate franchise fandom. With infinity of realities logically speaking there should also be a diversity of Infinity of home multiversal constants and laws of nature. This would actually take the following quote on the subject a bit further(httpswww. space As physicist and Nobel laureate Steven Weinberg told me on "Closer to Truththe source of all following interviews), "The word 'universe,' I suppose, should properly mean the whole thingeverything. But when we think of 'universe,' we sometimes use the word to mean just our Big Bang, the things we can see out to almost 14 billion light-years in all directions. And in this manner, it's reasonable to question: Is our universe unique? Are there multiple Big Bangs? Could there be multiple Big Bangs in different senses?What Triggered the Big Bang? It's Complicated (Op-EdWe started calling it a 'multiverse,meaning the entire ensemble of innumerable regions of disconnected space-time, said Andrei Linde, the Russian-American physicist now at Stanford. He developed the theory of "eternal chaotic inflation," which generates ever-increasing numbers of universes without end. Scientists created the neologism "multiverse," Linde continued, "because we found that what we had called 'the universe' can be divided into extremely large regions, which may have different laws of physics.
ConlonKeith chapter 4 . 8/9/2020
I hope I am not being to pushy I just wanted to provide examples of the infinite different rules for interdimensional travel beyond just the Stargate Franchise with the cascade failure when using a quantum mear. httpsarrow. fandom

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httpwhoniverse

httpstardis. fandom

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httpsstargate. fandom

httpsen.m. wikipedia

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If I wasn't to pushy and you are still working on the story. Could you explore these other links since it seems to me that Lilith/maya could actually not only expand her imperial dominion to other galaxies with in the same universe she could actually if she perfects alternate ways to travel to alternate realities outside of the quantum mear to realities where cascade affect is actually not a factor with interdimensional travel.
ConlonKeith chapter 7 . 8/9/2020
I hope I am not being to pushy I just wanted to provide examples of the infinite different rules for interdimensional travel beyond just the Stargate Franchise with the cascade failure when using a quantum mear. httpsarrow. fandom

httpsarrow. fandom

httpwhoniverse

httpstardis. fandom

httpstardis. fandom

httpsstargate. fandom

httpsen.m. wikipedia

httpsen.m. wikipedia

If I wasn't to pushy and you are still working on the story. Could you explore these other links since it seems to me that Lilith/maya could actually not only expand her imperial dominion to other galaxies with in the same universe she could actually if she perfects alternate ways to travel to alternate realities outside of the quantum mear to realities where cascade affect is actually not a factor with interdimensional travel.
ConlonKeith chapter 1 . 8/8/2020
Honestly I was disappointed that I was approximately nine to ten years to late to review Voider's original version of the story but I am going to go and ahead repost these same reviews on your reworked version of Empress in the Shadows if I am not to late for making any story suggestions.

Voau'ld is my idea for the name for the new Goa'uld genetic strain but I could still see Davros of Doctor Who combining his Daleks with the Goa'ulds and create something like a Goa'ulek or otherwards a species-race breeds that will genocidal exterminate any other lifeforms that are not necessarily of their own speciesrace or that they are not able to take over as the most extreme version of parasitic relationships with their hosts.
[report review for abuse] ConlonKeith chapter 20 . 18h ago
Honestly it would be interesting to see how Lillith would work with the technology of the Cybermen, Borg, Time Lords, Guardians of Time, Oans, Daleks, Vulcans, Kree, Scrulls, Kryptonians, the Celestials, the Watchers, the Precursers, and the Forewarners.
[report review for abuse] ConlonKeith chapter 17 . 20h ago
It would be interesting to have Stargate Atlantis, and Stargate Universe built in along with the Amazon Stargate Franchise ebooks, and Big Finish dramatized dramas to be involved in this particular story. In adjacent would you consider some multi-fandom crossover. For example your main character could when her civilization/empire advanced enough expand beyond the Alteran(Ancient), Furling, Nox, and Asgard galaxies of influence/power but also expand into various alternate universes with in her home multiverse. Which I understand the Stargate Franchise's cascade affect when multiversal travel is in play however it seems to me that other fandoms such as DC comics and Marvel comics might have other possible laws in play that just might be what nullifies the cascade affect within their closest universes -earth-realities with in their home multiverse that might just allow your main character to conquer the ones that are in between Marvel comics, DC comics, and the Stargate Franchise. Plus is it to much to mention that the following might just be a better explanation for the Stargate SG1 1969 time travel episode(People assume that time is a strict progression of cause to effect, but *actually* from a non-linear, non-subjective viewpointit's more like a big ball of wibbly wobbly... time-y wimey... stuff. The Doctor: Don't blink. Otherwords a bit more of time travel after affects being mutations(natural and artificial selection with microevolution to matriculation evolutionary process upon the multi-multiversal genetic/linnean categorization/ecological microenvironent and macroenvironment timeline code. This actually makes a bit more sense with the following historical scientific theory involving the cosmos httpsiep. utm. edu/platoorg/.
Firefox24x chapter 13 . 7/8/2020
I wish you would update this story because there aren't any others like this
ZhaWarudo chapter 13 . 2/18/2020
I was really expecting something when I've read the reviews saying it's better than the original. It's alright but it's not better. Sure it's less idealistic and that Earth vacation drama was nice but it's canceled by allowing disrespect from Ramon.
masterdude94 chapter 13 . 10/5/2019
Awesome story! I read the one this is based on a while ago, and I like what you've done with it!

Please come back to this soon!
amerdism chapter 13 . 9/19/2019
So will this story be continued? I hope so, I can't find many Goa'uld stories where said Goa'uld isn't outright evil, less still where the Goa'uld is a female character.
voidzzz chapter 13 . 7/5/2019
Great story, I do hope you'll come back to it even if it's unlikely. :)
Lirg123 chapter 11 . 2/22/2019
Surely their must be preserved/frozen sperm and egg banks? With such large society.
Givargis chapter 13 . 9/9/2018
I think I would rather this come back than the original, it's such a good story and i hope that it gets updated at some point
SunshineBubbles chapter 13 . 4/25/2018
Please tell me the stories and abandoned? I love it so much and I would love to see more of it.
Civic26 chapter 12 . 1/20/2018
I would really love to see the story continue. I've read it like three times last year and every time I have really good time with it. Very well written and perfectly balanced characters. I know a lot about real life stuff and writer's blocks etc. but I hope one day the author has an opportunity to come back to this story.
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