Reviews for The Fertility Game
time dragon chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
Funny, in-character, quick and witty dialogue, short but clear scenes. I love it. I could really see this working as an actual episode of the fourth season. Great job.
elizabeth.tattersdale chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
needs doctor and donna sex but rest of story was awsome
The Grey Panther chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Very cute and sweet. :)
I liked how you wrote the scene changes, leaving gaps and letting the readers figure out what happened.
whovianwrites chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Wow, I thought the Doctor and Donna were perfectly in character. Will you continue with this?
Iamnotafrakkingcylon chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
I really liked this one, although I think you could have made more of it! Some chapters with more details, more "scenes"! Oh, that way it could be like an episode, because you really seem to get the characters and their feeling! I really admire your writing style! Keep going (i louve your Donna and Doctor stories!)