|Reviews for Denied By Grace|
| vegarosa69 chapter 18 . 5/18
I love this author's other OMG story "A Devil's Redemption". But unfortunately I can't say the same for this fanfic. It has great story depth, it explains a lot of how other goddess live and train in heaven and the political parts of the story are pretty involved. But I feel that the main characters where a lot out of character. Keiichi pretty much took a back seat on this story and Urd gets harrased by Mara without doing anything about it. Belldandy turns into a human but almost immediately seems that she regrets her decision and spends the rest of the story pretty much in a sad state lamenting over Holybell, her powers and the rest of her goddess abilities. She even seem sad the her child was going to be a mortal, which is totally not like the Belldandy we know. When it's mentioned that Keiichi turns into a wind spirit, she refers to him as " a mere spirit" more than once. Like I said, Sombereye's other OMG stories are top notch and a must read, but I don't think this one falls into that category.
| superdude50989 chapter 18 . 3/5
When is there going to be more chapters to the story?
| devil-urd chapter 2 . 6/1/2016
Well, hi there!
Just saw that you've updated your profile, and seem to be keen on completing some of your unfinished stories. I honestly hope this one gets a little bit of love, as it is a personal favourite of mine. )
| Hichigo Kurosaki chapter 18 . 12/5/2015
I think that you are doing an exceptional job with this fanfic. I have seen a few fics with the same belldandy turns human concept but you are the only one i know of that goes so deep into the actual problems that comes with being mortal.
I think that the book recordings keep it interesting as well though until the reader reads more of the fanfic, i will say that it confuses people as to who exactly the entries are speaking to. It's clear now of course who the traveler is but it took until now to actually understand them.
Other than that, I have no problems with the fic myself. It has an interesting and complicated plot though I would suggest mentioning just how long the timeskips are before the actual stiry parts after the skip.
Overall, keep it up and please put out another chapter. I am very interested in reading it!
| Angelalex242 chapter 18 . 3/19/2015
I think the baby should, in fact, be stillborn as the System Force desires. That'd fix pretty much EVERYONE'S little red wagon that thinks they know better then Fate. Let the efforts to alter things fail...it's a potent life experience for Bell, who will carry the memory of a stillborn baby into eternity.
| reality deviant chapter 18 . 3/18/2015
nice chapter. shows the similarity and differences between the divine immortal and the mortal, in interesting ways- as the entire fic does.
| devil-urd chapter 18 . 3/17/2015
Great to see an update on this one.
If I understood things correctly, Urd is going to give birth to mortal souls who didn't make it with their mortals mothers?
I'm sorry, but if that's the case, i don't think i liked that part :/
Still, it's a great piece to read, and i'm looking foward to see exactly where you're taking this...
| manticore-gurl071134 chapter 18 . 3/16/2015
Great update! And it looks lie the plot is thickening. Is it wrong that I am glad there is a chance urd and hild will get along again?
| pwashington chapter 17 . 3/16/2015
But at the same time she couldn't kill him when he was the lord of terror even withe universe at stake she even defended him when she was a demon she compromised her morals for him she would break the law of heaven for him she would die for him even with her memeries gone her love wasn't mind control wouldn't work as far as she is concerned her home is with keiichi and when there working together they become and unstoppable force and an immoveable object then there is that jealous streak aprrantely she does not appreciate poachers who knew she was territorial I love her" oh know this bitch didn't " look when hild dared DARED to kiss her man I wonder if that will only get worse know she do sent have the divine goodness to keep it in check they deserve to be together fate is just a suggestion compered to there love they will search and eternity through a billion worlds and a billion lifetimes to be together
| Gamera68 chapter 18 . 3/16/2015
Getting interesting, that's for sure...
| pwashington chapter 18 . 3/16/2015
Finally an update keep going
| pwashington chapter 4 . 3/3/2015
I do like how you emphasize the inhuman aspects of belldandy as that demon showed they only look human they aren't I wish the manga used more of what TV tropes calls going cosmic I want to know more about heaven how goddesses interact with reality the other fanfic which I think does this keiichi's faith goddesses have vast cosmic power they could mess up the universe if they wanted
| devil-urd chapter 17 . 1/22/2015
Short again, but sweet :)
The part where Urd says mortal children know nothing had me instantly thinking "you know nothing Jon Snow"...i lol'ed ;)
Keep up the good work! I'm hoping for a longer chapter this time... these last 5 could be compressed into 1! But nonetheless, i'm happy that you're at least giving us something juicy to read while your Real Life doesn't give you some peace...
| Angelalex242 chapter 17 . 1/19/2015
Silly Urd. Belldandy needs to experience the full measure of humanity without cheating in order to use that experience on behalf of mortals in the future.
| reality deviant chapter 17 . 1/19/2015
i particularly like those small excerpts from the book, at the start of each chapter, and how they slowly progress.