|Reviews for Forsaken And Begotten|
| Ewok Kid chapter 1 . 10/25/2002
Looks to be a very promising plot! The awful stuff poor Obi-Wan must suffer through because of such a stubborn messed up Qui-Gon. Can't wait for more, so please post soon!
| Rieyeuxs chapter 1 . 10/25/2002
Great beginning! Can't wait to see what happens, but you'll break my heart if Qui-Gon doesn't save him!
| Padawan Kitara chapter 1 . 10/24/2002
Great start- I'll try not to lurk so much on this one
| Havoc chapter 1 . 10/24/2002
Wow... and just like that I'm hooked! Please don't leave us hanging too long! This is really good!
| megan chapter 1 . 10/24/2002
You can't leave us there! Please post more soon!
| Shannz chapter 1 . 10/24/2002
:O What a surprise! I just got done responding to your e-mail and decided to pop over here to see if anything new had been posted. I'm on my break so I gotta make this quick :)
I give you a much more indepth response in the e-mail I sent you, but needless to say I love this. The original baby bunny may have been mine, but you have so nurtured this fic and made it into your own. I love the way you've set things up for what's to come. I have to be careful here, not to give anything away-wouldn't want to spoil it for anyone else :)
Anyone who checks this out will be pleasantly surprised and instantly hooked by what Arldetta has planned-if you're not, then there is something wrong with ya! Love the Obi/Qui angst so far, and as usual Qui is a little late getting a clue. What are we gonna do with that man?
Off to a great start you are Arldetta, keep it coming girl. And if we have to wait awhile in between whilst you work on those other fics-that's okay too. Whatever you come up with will be well worth the wait i'm sure :) Break's almost up-gotta go.
| Ciria chapter 1 . 10/24/2002
My God... I totally LOVED this! You really have to continue soon, I wanna know what will happen! So please... and I'm the one who's begging, you really don't have to do that, there's no need for it. So, please, please update soon!
| Heidi M chapter 1 . 10/24/2002
Oh please update soon, this sounds good! I hope that Obi-Wan is okay, please let him be okay!
| Haha chapter 1 . 10/23/2002
Great start! I really like what's happening with Obi-Wan. Hurt and now hurt again, oh no! I love it!
| Chu Chukiss chapter 1 . 10/23/2002
please write more soon like right now lol
please write more very good so far
| Cascadia chapter 1 . 10/23/2002
Looks great, Arldetta! :o) I've been waiting for you to start this since I saw you were planning on it. Glad to see it's here.
Well, I know a little more than what's in the summary, so I won't spoil it for anyone, but I'm really looking forward to see what you'll do with it. You have the talent to make this a great story.
| trrbd chapter 1 . 10/23/2002
No need to beg. ;)
Great idea! Now I'm really worried about Obi-Wan - he has a fever, there's not Qui-Gon (he's an idiot but he's also a Jedi Master), and he's been captured by pirates.
Lookin' forward to more, though. :D