Reviews for Vacation Hell
Rokigo chapter 5 . 12/20/2016
Welcome back! I'm glad you haven't lost your touch with writing high quality stories.
BlackRoseFire chapter 5 . 12/7/2016
Awesome story. I am glad to see you're writing again.
Isamu chapter 5 . 11/27/2016
Oh shit, a new chapter! Glad to see another chapter on this story. Hopefully we'll see another sooner than later.

Was wondering when something that the folks at Umbrella had cooked up would come out and play. I liked how the powered individuals were able to just tear it up after a little bit while the more mundanely awesome characters just kinda went "fuck this noise, we are those bastards with super powers?" and kept clear. No jealousy, just smart division of labor. In general, that's something I dig about these stories in general. The powered trio tears shit up pretty well, but the monsters still remain a threat. I really do like that, and you don't see that as much as you ought to in this type of story.

Also, damn is Du an useless ass. I also find that funny.

Keep it up!
MJ chapter 5 . 11/21/2016
Ayyyeee you're alive! Great update, keep writing and enjoy your time :).
Bookfisher chapter 5 . 11/21/2016
Nice, I fear what monstrosity Disney have left behind
The Book of Eli chapter 5 . 11/21/2016
Oh man I love the creature references. I can't wait to see what else is to come from the island or horror...
CajunBear73 chapter 5 . 11/21/2016
Quite the night each group had...LOL!

Some loose ends dealt with, closer relationships, new ones budding, one living on wishful vapors, and the last coming across as an old married couple...

And Ash, keep your mouth shut about, 'nothing else could happen...'. It always leads to something else happening.

A little bawdy talk between the five, but I wonder in the end if they all could end up keeping company as a group, instead of two...

Jimmy1201 chapter 5 . 11/21/2016
WooHoo! another chapter about favorite GJ team. Pat and Gloria are as cute as a pile of kittens and their relationship seems to be coming along nicely - in between having monsters try to eat them. It is interesting to see Shego, Kim and Ron be the senior agents, sort of the mentors of the bunch. I hope that Dr. Dir tries another vacation sometime - but Ash can't be in the building when she picks the place and makes the reservations.
Thanks, Jimmy
te.nellis chapter 5 . 11/21/2016
Lol the girls war warming up to being in a giant relationship with each other and Ron. The monsters are hilarious. Keep it up!
The Book of Eli chapter 4 . 3/10/2016
Man this is funny and awesome. I can't wait to see more...
Graybear32 chapter 4 . 12/31/2015
I finally got to read you latest installment of trio and once again am very impressed. looking forward to more.
Avengersblade chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
Amazing job so far your stories have o
nly improved as times gone by. This is by far one of my most favorite story chains and I hope you keep up the good work!
ghost boy 952 chapter 3 . 8/9/2015
Great story. It's called the pandimensional vortex inducer
mystery joker chapter 4 . 6/11/2015
I do hope you update soon. Although I have a question, It was hinted that another woman might join in the Harem. I was wondering if that is a possibility. (It was hinted in the prequel "The Lusting")
Jaser Paladin chapter 4 . 2/28/2015
Love this whole series you've written. You're a damn wizz with stories. Hope to read more in the near future.
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