Reviews for Off the Cliff and Into the Water
xXderpyninjaXx chapter 2 . 4/30/2014
Great story! Pls keep it going. A good way to describe your characters is by splitting your chapters for like scenes where they can talk about themselves(although I don't think Viv would). I hope this could be helpful. I no you said no pairings,but don't you think that the characters MIGHT develop some feelings for each other? Just saying what I think should happen. Can't wait for the next chappie!

Lots of chocolate,
myscout14 chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
I really like this! Please update soon, I want moooooore :)