Reviews for The Phoenix
aliciathewolf45 chapter 11 . 10/11
Awww that sucks that you have to rewrite all that work. But I understand how it is. I feel like I should rewrite some of my work. But I’ll read your stories cause I love the way you write them and your ideas.
Plus, if you want to reuse Alicia, go ahead. I love how you write her :D
Looking forward to your new work and one more thing...
PLEASE CONTINUE THE TDI STORY!
Thank you ;3
ReenstheHedgehog2 chapter 10 . 4/23/2016
Pretty good story so far, even with grammar mistakes here and there
I'm detecting a hint of Frozen and some other influences too, so there's a plus.
If you're still taking OCs, I'd like Reens' counterpart Agravaine to appear, even if it's just a cameo.
Name: Agravaine Marci
Species: Hedgehog
Age: 17
Alignment: Good/Pure Good
Appearance: In her civilian clothing, Agravaine wears a blue tunic with gold trim, a pair of wide brown pants, and black boots with hard toes. When in her knight armor, her breastplate is copperish with gold accents, along with her lower armor plating. Her shoes are leather boots. As for her helmet, it is open in the front.
Physical Appearance:
Quill Style: Long and flowy
Hair Style/Color: Braided/Dark Blue
Fur Color: Light Blue
Eye Color: Light Blue
Skin: Peach with a pale muzzle
Height: 4'7"
Weight: 45 kilograms (98 lbs)
Skills: Very good swords-woman, runs at a good speed, is able to pick up foreign languages quickly, can get along with mostly everyone
Powers: Aquakinesis, Heart Powers
Weaponry: Golden long-sword, heart energy, water attacks, bodily attacks
Any other information needed/wanted PM me!
Guest chapter 9 . 11/26/2015
Wow. Amazing story! The way you decribe the character's, its short and to the point. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon... please? Anyways, keep up your good work!
- D
PHANTOM9997 chapter 9 . 3/1/2015
I can't wait for this to be updated! It's so good, I love the setting! I can hardly wait! squeals
Fade: Just stop it already
No, it's too good!
Fade:Ugh, whatever
You're just jealous!
Fade:Am not!
Are too!
Kendra hilferty chapter 9 . 1/18/2015
Oh yeah oculto hidden now I get it no wonder that word looked so familiar great job please update soon:-D :-D :-) :-)
Kenny
Christian Ape99 chapter 9 . 1/18/2015
I totally can't wait to see what will happen next time.
aliciathewolf45 chapter 9 . 1/18/2015
That is a hard thing to say...
aliciathewolf45 chapter 8 . 11/13/2014
(Shivers)I hate beetles...hate them...
Christian Ape99 chapter 8 . 11/13/2014
This story is totally very interesting.
werewolf99 chapter 7 . 10/19/2014
I really enjoy this story so far & here's the information that i promised, but be warned the character is very weird, different, & proud of it. That's because i created it that way.
Abilities: can cook, play piano, & dunk a basketball forwards, backwards, & sideways, cooks food on the forehead, hyper hearing, mega hyper quick reflexes & balancing, can heal all people & its self, & is a grand master escaping electric cages
Age: immortal
Alignment: neutral
Appearance: gray, blue, brown, red, pink, green, silver, gold, & orange colored with neon yellow, lime green, & peach streaks all over its fur, gold wings with gold & silver tips, red & gold shoes with gold velcro, a yin yang marking on its forehead, 25 lighting bolt shaped scars across its chest, a 50 spiked collar, a eye patch over its left eye, 8 crescent moon shaped scars above its left eye, a teal & gold bandanna on its head, silver & gold sunglasses, gold leather jacket, gold gloves, a silver & gold sequined tuxedo for parties, 20 silver & gold anklets with spikes on both ankles, a pirate tattoo on the left arm & a good golden dragon tattoo on the right arm
Background: Had a great life with father Ken, mother Gina, twin sister Julie & very annoying yet cruel older brother Lucas. Was working in a circus working as a circus performer until the parents, twin sister Julie, & very annoying & cruel older brother Lucas scared poor Spencer with clowns. Spencer was crying & thought the bad luck was over but wrong-o because that same afternoon Spencer & family was surrounded by the most evil band of treasure stealing pirates led by the mega hyper cruel & beyond disgusting smelly Louie the rabbit. Louie killed the family members right in front of Spencer while Oliver the badger the time stuffed Spencer into a bag. Poor Spencer was not only forced on the ship but when Louie saw the poor gorilla he rubbed the gorilla in his really mega beyond disgusting smelly armpit, tied up the gorilla really mega tight with rope, & threw the gorilla into the beyond mega disgusting smelly pile of dung & jail cell. Oliver the badger however was not very happy of what he's doing so he not only betrayed Louie but killed him, grabbed his pirate hat, & rushed down to the jail cell & opened up the door to not only let Spencer out he cut off Spencers' rope prison & then stuck Louies' captain hat on top of Spencers' head & from that point made Spencer the new pirate captain. Oliver wants to quit stealing treasure like Spencer did so Spencer & Oliver both decided to quit stealing treasure & instead decided to go on many adventures instead as 2 best friends forever & that's what they did. The End.
Best Friends: Oliver the badger, Wilson the dog, Ruben the water panther, & Tails
Birthday: June 24th
Birthplace: New York City
Christian: No
Dislikes/ Loathes: jeans, coconuts, dirty dancing, cussing & swearing, gambling, all types of pranks & mama jokes, violence( will fight only when has too), smoke alarms, going to jail, Satan, the Lord Jesus Christ ( don't ask), mummies, zombies, thunderstorms, oatmeal, really rotten dirty jokes, drugs, being spied on, ghosts, horror & gory movies & books, & reading the BIBLE
Enemies: Sally Acorn & Phineas
Family: None
Fears: thunderstorms, sharks, & clowns
Genders: Male & Female
Height: 6' 8"
Hobbies: reading the sports section of newspapers, working out in all types of gyms, drinking 30 cans of Dr. Pepper a day, & playing the flute
Hometown: GOLDEN MOON VILLAGE
IQ: 295
Jobs: a retired pirate captain, a bouncer a club, a wrestler, a circus performer, & a drama teacher
Loves: drama, candles, comic books, dragons, pottery, jewelry, shopping, art paintings, belching out loud, being a mega total bad ass, strip clubs, all types of regular clubs, werewolves & other were-animals( changes into a were-gorilla when fighting), roller coasters, heights, being mega hyper beyond disgusting smelly, gross, & proud of it around all other males, bubble baths, hot showers, being beyond mega clean around all other females, clean jokes, food fights, sugary foods, romance movies & action movies that has no cussing & swearing, cooking, flying, all types of sports, swimming, playing the flute, & its red & gold mega quadrupled horse powered Harley Davidson motorcycle
Musical Instraments: flute mostly, banjo, fiddle, bells, French Horn, drums, & cymbals
Name: Spencer Louise Ricardo
Nicknames: the Universal Champion King & Queen of Wrestling & Smelliest of Gorillas & the Universal Champion of Music
Origins: American, Asian, European, & Mexican
Personalities around males: sly, cunning, mega sneaky & quick, mysterious, dishonest, untrustworthy, cruel, mega beyond disgusting smelly, gross, & proud of it, a grand master thief, beyond evil, rude, rough, tough, & being a mega total bad ass
Personalities around females: gentle, kindhearted, beyond timid & shy, playful, caring, loyal, compassionate, trustworthy, honest, polite, lovable, helpful, thoughtful, & really beyond mega smart & wise
Race: Mexican
Secrets: changes into 9 different transformations including a were-gorilla while fighting & can weigh 19,800 pounds all muscles & not fat BTW when angered & upset
Species: gorilla
Weaknesses: its tempter, having no family, ice, metal cages, enclosed areas, & clowns
Weight: 9,000 pounds all muscles & not fat
SonicFanFlame chapter 7 . 10/19/2014
Tails NOOOOOOO! We lost him to the pervert side. Good story it keeps the viewers interested
aliciathewolf45 chapter 7 . 10/19/2014
Awwww! I hate cliffies! But it got kinda cute at the end
ShadAmyFanGirl chapter 6 . 10/15/2014
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE BATTLE!
ThePurplePyroHedgie chapter 2 . 9/18/2014
Really interesting story so far. Being a queen at sixteen is not odd. Queen Mary of Scots was a Queen by age 15! Keep up the good work, I love medieval Sonic stories. I'm working on one myself. :)
KikiLynnhedgehog 21 chapter 2 . 9/18/2014
Can you find a place for Kiki in your story? As night who have skillfully at sword
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