Reviews for For the Love of the Hokage
Guest chapter 8 . 7/28
This is one of the few Naruto fanfictions that isn’t garbage thank you
RenegadeSon chapter 12 . 7/10
Honestly one of the best stories I have read on this site. You write from the 1st person point of view extremely well. I really feel like I am in the life of Hinata as I am reading. I felt like I was fainting at the end of this chapter lol. I'm really interested in seeing where the plot goes from here. I'm sure you had in mind to show more of people's reactions to the the relationship. I can see quite a few different potential conflicts that can make for some good storylines: Hiashi not approving of the relationship (and possibly wanting to marry Hinata off), Takuma being an antagonist in some form (most likely wanting Hinata to throw a coup), someone attacking Gaara's wedding and sending the nations into chaos (that would be an arc within itself), etc. You have quite an opportunity on your hands and I can only hope that you continue!
Guest chapter 12 . 6/9
marfralle chapter 12 . 5/22
Nooooooooo, i need more :(
LeafShinobi chapter 4 . 3/19
When will chapter 13 come?
D00rFr4m3 chapter 11 . 10/12/2018
Ahhh! The plot thickens! I could see the Tenten/Kiba coming, I just didn't expect it to happen like this.

I'm really looking forward to their date, I'm very curious about what Naruto did.
D00rFr4m3 chapter 10 . 10/12/2018
I really liked the POV change, it was an excellent change up.

This is great overall, though. I really like how relaxed and fluffy it is.
D00rFr4m3 chapter 3 . 10/11/2018
I like your Tenten, she's sarcastic in the best way. It's hilarious.
hinatasgreatestfan chapter 12 . 5/16/2018
This story is great so far. Definitely loving it and looking forward to more. The romance is adorable, and I sincerely hope you're not abandoning this.
hinatasgreatestfan chapter 7 . 5/16/2018
Let me start by saying I am thoroughly enjoying this story so far. However, there is an inconsistency that needs fixed. I just read the note on chapter 8, so I know why it's like this. However, in chapter 6, Naruto and Hinata arrange their date for "this Sunday". Here in chapter 7, Hinata mentions the date being "next Saturday". Like I said, I know why from next chapter's note, but this needs fixing.
muzicaldove chapter 12 . 1/17/2018
please update! I'm dying to know what the hyuuga clan wants. and I wanna see more NaruHina romance.
Usa-chan chapter 12 . 6/13/2017
The fainting is OK, especially here, If I were her I would definitely faint!
Please, continue this story, I know that when you left something for a long time you just lose either interest or motivation, but I wanted to let you know that I think this story is a masterpiece and I would live to keep reading this story.
Usa-chan chapter 11 . 6/13/2017
The Kiba-Ten thing doesn't bother me at all, actually in canon both of them are lonely and I wouldn't mind that they could also get a little bit of love.
Of course that I would keep on reading the next chapter. I see is the last one and you haven't updated in a long time, heck, I don't even now if you still plan on keep writing this story but if you do I could die happily. To much drama right? Sorry.
Saludos desde México
Usa-chan chapter 10 . 6/12/2017
I really love stories with Naruto's POV because he is so sincere and loud (even in his mind) and when he thinks about Hinata my inner self just squeals, lol. You did great my friend!
The only thing that was weird is that Naruto was telling everybody about his almost sex night, idk maybe is because I wouldn't do that, but it's Naruto! The more unpredictable ninja, so I guess it makes sense.
I just love your writing, you are awesome!
Usa-chan chapter 9 . 6/12/2017
This chapter was absolutely AMAZING!
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