|Reviews for Waiting for You|
| MikeAlphaGamer chapter 6 . 7/7
Congrats on the -1 Favorite,
And 1 People You have Disappointed.
| MikeAlphaGamer chapter 5 . 7/7
Yeah, I really liked your story about Aversa mourning Robin, adapting to motherhood, and waiting to see if Robin would return. (Along with her reaction in the case he returned after "abandoning" her)
But this Prequel stuff,
Fredrick is just completely unlikable
The plot points you ulture take away almost everything from the competency in the Shepherds (The beginning builds them up so we feel how awesome our heroes are, before the devastation of the Peligian War shows us how vulnerable our heroes really are)
Worse of all is how Robin's Character has been weakened to the point of patheticness, without his Amnesia half the intrigue of his character is gone, and the other half (This "ooooh strangers have been stalking me all my life, OH NO~") is downright bland, if not completely uninteresting. However stripping away has added one thing to his character, and I applaud you for keeping this detail. Without this detail, the character point of Robin being an Amnesiac Tactical Savant, somehow having Tactical brilliance on par with Sun Tzu, Alexander the Great, and Hannibal Barker, despite him not being able to remember past his first meeting with Chrom. So you did the only thing to do after stripping him of one of his most interesting trait, you gave him the tactical sense of Colonel Custer! I could, forgive the Coward thing, evolution of character and all that. However the stripping of Robins Tactical Master just weakens EVERYONE to the point of unforgivable. WHY! Why would the Exalt, appoint a man she just met, wearing a Puglian robe, to the position of Shepard Tactician if his tactics at best are on above average? SHE HAS AN ENTIRE ARMY OF SOLDIERS, should could easily find an average Traction with no question of loyalty.
The only reason, Robin would get appointed to Shepherd Tactician is if his Tac IQ was OFF THE CHARTS!
You have one more chapter, if it sucks as much as these last two, I am unmoving on principle.
You want to write a crappy story, don't poison a good one just so you could 4 more views.
| MikeAlphaGamer chapter 4 . 7/7
I am not sure I like you messing with the Main Continuity too much.
The Preludes and Side quests, I can mostly agree with small changes here and there.
But the BIG things like Robin not having Amnesia, or the Shepherds losing the Khans alliance thing. I just don't agree with.
| Thiggy chapter 3 . 10/17/2015
"Sully approached the tactician and promptly punched him in the gut."
And this is why we all love Sully.
| Though chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
Aversa is a tsundere. There's no other way to look at it. She's a tsundere mom.
| Mcnugget5699 chapter 5 . 6/15/2015
Really like this whole series. Was pleasantly surprised when I noticed that you're still working on it with this latest part because I thought since it had been so long it was done. Although I was a bit disappointed it didn't really mention Aversa until near the end. I think that for the next part you should focus more on her and Robin.
| Zallow chapter 5 . 5/30/2015
Seriously, I love your story, so I don't mind about what you're going to write next time. However, since it has been a long time, I read your fanfiction again and I think it would be better to jump directly to the parts with Robin and Aversa.
Not that I mind the other, but since this is a fanfiction about this couple, you should keep it as the main element of your story.
| 1234567890000000 chapter 5 . 5/30/2015
This is amazing. Like no words. I can't even. *cough* well imma try to keep the fangirl in and try to give u a semi-alright review.
I read all ur stories in one sitting. I read one of them (I can't remember which one though) before and then couldn't find it again because I'm incompetent on my new phone, but anyways they're all so good. And I really don't know what else to say.
Your writing is solid, interesting, and it's really easy to read. Everything just kinda flows. Haha yeahhhh it's three in the morning and I just spent an hour reading ur Aversa and Robin stuff so ty for depriving me of even more sleep.
Yep this is dragging on so I'm just gonna say you've made me into a Robin and Aversa shipper, you're awesome, and I hope you continue to write you got a talent for it.
Keep up the good work and wish me luck on Aversas recruitment mission thingy (It's impossible)
| Panther Hardraad chapter 5 . 5/29/2015
Hmm interesting. I've read all the parts to this and quite frankly I want more.
| TheGiantRock chapter 5 . 5/29/2015
I like this Robin over Perfect!Robin. I'm also enjoying the original timeline, so I'd prefer more detail for it instead of skipping straight to Robin and Aversa bits.
Good job so far on making an interesting story, both the original chapters and the prequels!
| patattack chapter 5 . 5/29/2015
Cool. Interesting to see the alternate future, since there's only vague mentions in the game itself.
| Shikuro-kun chapter 4 . 12/28/2014
It's interesting that you chose to do a prequel for this pairing. Robin as a nomad is what I also imagined him to be prior to meeting the Shepherds and Chrom. But what really intrigues me is when he'll use the stone Aversa gave him, hmm...
| Dane Namor chapter 4 . 12/25/2014
I liked the original story, but this one feels really disconnected. It should probably be a seperate story in itself I'd think.
On the content itself, it's definitely a struggle. I understand starting from the bottom so you can build up and I dearly hope you plan to build up, because the Robin here is not just unlikeable but practically worthless and, unnescessarily so.
He's lost every single encounter he's been in and, as far as I've seen, I believe has yet to do a single useful thing so far? In Southtown he spent so long thinking about how he could possibly do something that he was attacked (in a mysteriously lucky way) and defeated before he could actually do something. He didn't cast a single spell! Despite thinking "I can defeat 5 of these guys, but not 8." And then Emmeryn owes him a great favour? If he'd saved Chrom's life perhaps, but unless I misread it, he attempted to help Chrom but... Didn't. Why offer him the post of tactician? He didn't do anything strategic.
| Nero The Insane chapter 3 . 11/24/2014
I NEED MORE!
| Shikuro-kun chapter 3 . 10/23/2014
Every chapter has been a pleasure reading and this was just as good. I enjoyed the dynamics between Aversa and Robin, especially her reaction to his long awaited return. Eagerly looking forward to what the last chapter has in store. Thank you for writing this bloody brilliant story!