|Reviews for The Herald's Vision|
| Behind.Bespectacles chapter 5 . 10/3
This is so excellent, and I hope you haven't abandoned it. I love your story, and would love to read more of it. You've done a thorough job and made everything believable; Please, please update.
| detrametal chapter 5 . 8/20
a very great, albeit sad, story are you going to continue this?
| PoptartLegit chapter 3 . 8/7
I really enjoy this story, but I'm sorta confused at the moment. Like ya know when Slade said "When you find another woman able to carry a Changeling's child..." is he saying that he has to impregnate another person so that Raven can return?! That kinda sucks ya know.
I mean wouldn't that be seriously weird and cringe-worthy? And won't that be considered cheating on your wife even if you are saving her?! I don't really like that, but other than that, this is a really emotional story and great!
| daniiibabiii chapter 5 . 5/15
I don't like the whole someone else having gar's kid Idea but i am excited to see where both sides of the story go
| RavenSerendipity chapter 5 . 2/19
I hope you write more bc this story completely sucked me in. :)
| Tigeresscrazy chapter 5 . 2/4
It's really good though it's a bit of a challenge for me because the story goes from present to futur I'm not Shure I understand everything because of this but I'm going to stick with it it's been a long time since I read a story fan fiction or other wise that was this challenging to read an for that I curse you an thank you at the same time lol your writing style is really good as is the story it's self I'm looking forward to reading futur chapters
| Theonewhodidnotdoit chapter 5 . 11/23/2014
Very interesting. Looks like a nice, twisty plot so far, and your writing is superb. Hoping to see more soon!
| BurntTitan chapter 5 . 11/9/2014
Really intriguing but please cut back on the swear words. It does not fit the characters. Other than they saying F**king... , you got the characters well done! Side note: the events in the five seasons took about 1& a half years. Great job! Keep it up!
| A guy that likes to read chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
You need to continue this story, this story has become my drug. Raven is my favorite cartoon character and is my fictional wife so you must contiue it so i can see her brought back to life. Also if its possible you should get younger raven's pov for the vision.
Keep up the good work!
| Renton-torston chapter 5 . 8/28/2014
me encanto no puedo dejar de pensar que esto afectara al chico bestia de la otra dimensión y que este de alguna forma le ayudara
| JasonVUK chapter 5 . 8/25/2014
:o So we're going between Universes. And Raven is somehow still alive, the baby too, somewhere. :O You gotta find them Changeling.
What I don't get is why they're going between Universes, is this Raven and baby in the young Raven's universe?
| JasonVUK chapter 4 . 8/25/2014
Wow Raven. :c You're really harsh on Beast Boy's feels.
D: I HOPE that was a Multi-Verse future, so does that mean there is only 1 Herlad and he can go inbetween all these Multi-Verses?
| iamking chapter 5 . 8/24/2014
| kathrynmehr chapter 5 . 8/24/2014
I like where the stories going keep it up!
| LiumD chapter 5 . 8/24/2014
Oh dear, back to old Trigon, huh? That never ends well. Still a little confused about the whole Slade wanting him to have another child with someone.