Reviews for Halo: Total Eclipse
darkfinder chapter 2 . 3/29/2015
well that was interesting . so how much difference will he make .
Dragon Noire chapter 4 . 2/28/2015
This story is amazing. I hope to see it updated soon as its got to be one of the better ones out there.
phantom00 chapter 4 . 1/31/2015
Please update soon!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/16/2015
when are going to update
Guest chapter 4 . 12/3/2014
when are going to update
SpecH82T chapter 4 . 9/18/2014
Soooooooooo now we need chapter 5, 6, 7, 8, 9 and 10 Pronto :)
SpecH82T chapter 3 . 9/18/2014
Chapter 5 now... please? :)
SpecH82T chapter 2 . 9/18/2014
Go forth chief :)
Hope you'll continue to update this, quite interested to see where you'll take it :)
SpecH82T chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
Hell yeeeeeeees cut those little fuck into bits and pieces
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13/2014
when are going to update
Trife chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
I would suggest rereading this chapter out loud to your self. The wording is very choppy in several places in the story. I would also like to suggest instead of putting information dumps about the technology and weapons they are using in the middle of the chapter instead put them all at the end in the form of a codex/Author Note.

Trife
ace chapter 4 . 6/23/2014
nice, I like were this story is going keep it up.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/9/2014
I'm glad that Kazusa is alive, I really like her

Though too bad the other girls didnt survive. If Chief had intervied sooner then maybe at least Izumi would also be alive

also A for a ML fic without Mr Time Looper. Though Chief sure is OP. I'm honestly not really sure if Halo has the technicalities for Japanese Mecha warfare. Seems a bit weird for them to jump from a "Battletech Esque" chicken mech to something that would put the Exia to shame
Guest chapter 4 . 6/7/2014
when are going to update
LuBu081 chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
I think it's about time someone got serious about making this crossover. It'd been long-overdued for one.
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