A tear escaped her left eye? Why only her left? : lol

No offence but why is perseus like this?

Isnt he a god? Because all i can see is him acting as if he mortal.

The interaction between Perseus and the hunters was pointless

Doesnt seem like hes the god of intelligence by the way hes acting.

Poseidon! Lord of the seas! Cowering before Zeus and the council? ik you need drama and betrayal but at least keep them in character. And Athena wisdom incarnate! can't cook up a plan to help her child from afar despite wanting too? what even the fu-? it's more believable to have them simply not care enough rather than this pathetic display of caring and being powerless. *sigh* didn't even read it all because what the freaking f- . *deep breathes *

I really love how much potential the plot has got. yk god percy and all that. But...this feels too easy despite no godly cheat happening around. On a side note, my mortal brain is 'trespassed' by the typos i see here.

Is the riddle i am the confidence of all who kive and breathe from the movie gods of Egypt

Buena historia

nice story, please update

Tried really hard...but trashy writing is really not for me.

i can accept grammatical errors and even wrong spelling, but to use the wrong words? Vocabulary is very basic. I can't continue, it's much too distracting and annoying for me.

Post the rest here please!

What is the link?

I did not think that the hi Teresa deserved to die. I also didn’t like that you had a huntress banished from the hunt just because she wanted to avenge her beloved brother