Reviews for The Heart Line
TheWhitlockGirl chapter 3 . 12/2/2016
Just found your story and am really enjoying it, hope you get the chance to write more
nerdylittlesecret chapter 3 . 11/17/2015
I LOVE THIS! Its an amazing and completely unique premise and this has the potential to be an amazing story! Please update soon!
jk chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
he ate rabbit stew? he has warmth to offer? I thought he was a fucking vampire!
nhacker chapter 3 . 6/8/2015
Please add more, finish this story
Guest chapter 3 . 2/9/2015
Just discovered your is amazing. A truly original take on events. Well written. I love your version of Paul. I would love to read more of this's. I hope your RLEEAP has improved. Wishing you well.
1WhoLoves2ReadAlot chapter 3 . 9/28/2014
It's really good, so far! Love it! Hope you get a changer to write more.
TwistedNeiviv chapter 3 . 6/17/2014
Woo! What a great chapter!
gredelina1 chapter 3 . 6/6/2014
The only mistake was the shift to first person POV in the last section of the chapter. Other than that it was great.

It's Paul! It's Paul! It's Paul! *does happydance*

Okay, I've calmed down. As you could see, I'm really happy that the wolf turned out to be Paul. Love him! And he imprinted on her! Yay! Loved how his concern for Bella made him go to the place he thought he'd never go back to. I'm guessing that he accidentaly killed his mom when he phased the first time? And he's been living with that guilt all alone since. Poor baby. Hopefully he can get some reassurance from the pack that it wasn't his fault.

I wish there were more chapters to read, but I'll patiently wait for the next piece of brilliancy to come.

Hope everything turns out for the best in your RL. xxx
gredelina1 chapter 2 . 6/6/2014
This story is so good, and so original. I absolutely love it! It's definitely a wolf then, and he's from La Push. Hmm... Who could it be?
gredelina1 chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
Checked your profile after reading My Angel and found you had started another story. Just had to read it! I'm definitely intrigued. That was an excellent first chapter that invoked a lot of questions. Of course, the first one is: who rescued Bella? Since I thought I read that he killed Victoria with his bare hands (have to go back and re-read that part) I obviously thought it was a vampire. Then you definitely threw me for a loop when he helped himself to a portion food, and he was warm. So, not a vampire then. A wolf? But who? I'm hurrying along to the next chapter *waves behind back, rushing away*
FabPezBerry78 chapter 3 . 6/5/2014
great job and chapter i love :)
d2woodworth chapter 3 . 6/5/2014
I love this story so far and I am so excited whenever I see update. Thanks for writing!
chanur chapter 3 . 6/5/2014
Excellent chapter. It's the first Bella/any wolf's story I read. So I'm very happy that it's Paul.
Hope things get better for you. We can't control fate, but we can control what we give to the people we are about to lose.
Lady Skyelite chapter 3 . 6/4/2014
As I said in my review to 'My Angel", I devoutly hope and pray that the news you get will be even better than 'not as bad'! Bad is still bad but I will ask the Gods to make the 'least bad' that is possible for you and those you love! My prayers are with you, no matter what the news is, my dear! Paul is Bella's imprint, isn't he? With Sam being the Alpha of the pack, a pack that Paul had no idea even existed, where does that leave him? And his Bella? Sue and Charlie will undoubtedly want her to return to Forks, but I don't think that it can work that way, can it? And what kind of stink will Jacob Black try and raise about this? If he challenges the imprint bond, what, if anything, can the other wolves do then? Jake's nothing if not stubborn and unwilling to see anything but what HE wants to, and what he wants is for Bella to be HIS! Bella doesn't share that sentiment with Jake though, does she? Sam and the rest of the tribe hopefully will be able to keep Jake from doing something stupid, and getting himself killed! The other problem is going to be Charlie, won't it? He does know about the wolves, but Bella is his daughter, and I doubt that he's going to be anything but an idiot for a time either! Paul has done the best he possibly can for her, but even he knew that he couldn't do more than he has already. His discomfort at being in La Push is secondary to getting help for his Bella, but he DID make it VERY clear that he will NOT be separated from her, no matter what! he will take her and leave first, and I think that she would be more than willing to go with him! She isn't used to being with so many people after so long as a prisoner of Victoria, and most of the time will be very afraid of just about anyone BUT Paul! He's already on a hair trigger anyway, so I just hope that none of the wolves, or anyone else, does something moronic, at least until both of them are a bit more comfortable at Emily and Sam's home! I can't wait to see where this goes from here, and who gets their tail stepped on, so to speak! In the meantime, I think both Paul and Bella need a little care and compassion from every single one they come in contact with, don't you? And he needs food, lots and lots of food! I have you and your loved ones in my heart and in my prayers, good luck and Gods be with you! Lady Skyelite.
Fakin'it chapter 3 . 6/4/2014
Very interesting story so far.
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