Reviews for Voldemort's Assassin
SeverusSnape'sLove chapter 42 . 8/16
Love it.
Ellen Smock chapter 42 . 7/23
I really enjoyed this story. I’m going to note a few internal conflicts. I’m doing this because, generally, this story is very well constructed, despite its complexity. Each time I hit a conflict, I found myself pulled out of the story. I had to go back to see if my memory was correct. That’s really a shame.
Examples:
When did Harry tell Hermione about Snape’s body being missing?
Chapter 3:
“The Casket was empty?!” Hermione gasped and Harry nodded.
Chapter 10:
}Her mind, traitorous thing that it was, flitted back to one of those evenings in which she and Ron had spent arguing about their old teacher.
“…he wasn’t there, Ron!” Hermione insisted.
Ron, tired of this argument slouched deeper into the worn couch that matched other worn, used furniture in their one room flat. “Death Eaters could have found him, Hermione. Harry’s told you this. Just because there was no body doesn’t mean the git traipsed off with those injuries. La di dah!”
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When did Snape realize that taking the Dark Mark had been a mistake?
Chapter 12:
“I knew, possibly the second that evil burned into my arm, that I had done something beyond idiocy; I had ended my life.”
Later that chapter:
“I was still young, and in thrall to Tom Riddle’s vision that was to better the wizarding world. It was some time before it sunk in that his visions were not so beneficent but more crude in that Voldemort desired the annihilation of all Muggles and Muggle-borns.”
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What happened to the Malfoy house elves?
Chapter 16:
Severus replied, “The Ministry confiscated all 270 house elves…and sold them to aid in recovery efforts after the war,” smirked Severus as he sipped again at his brandy. (noting that it would be better if Severus either replied or smirked, rather than do both )
Chapter 24: “Except when Narcissa left with nearly all the house elves, 100,000 galleons, and the villa in Italy,” snorted Severus.
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Again, I really enjoyed this story. I hope you don’t take it badly that I’m pointing these out. I just know that you don’t want your reader questioning the story as it goes along.
Thank you so much for this!
Readerjkr chapter 5 . 7/7
Very well written.
Netchka3 chapter 42 . 5/19
Wonderfull story. I love it.
jensteed chapter 34 . 11/20/2014
Noooo! Why Minerva? I could have managed nearly anyone else dying (apart from my favourite Slytherins of course) but she's always been an amazing character :'(
TheLadyJaye chapter 42 . 9/17/2014
That was lovely!
Newtinmpls chapter 25 . 9/11/2014
I'm crying as I read the end of chapter 25. Lovely emotions without overdoing them. The non-demonstrative nature of Severus' farewell just gets me. You are an artist.
Jimbocous chapter 42 . 8/25/2014
Sweet story, nicely written. Thanks for a fun read!
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 42 . 8/22/2014
Interesting plot. It took me a while to understand why the story was titled as it was since that aspect did not come in till later in the story. Over all cute ending to this HG/SS story :)
KristieRoxie chapter 9 . 8/7/2014
Really amazing story so far. But the fact that Severus just lets Hermione get away with slapping him not once but twice just irritates me so much! I hate the fact that authors write that Hermione can get away with slapping anybody across the face with just a shocked face in retaliation because she's Hermione Granger. She's not Merlin so she shouldn't get away with something like that. Just my opinion. Not saying I don't like the story, it's really good. I love it actually so far.
Bergere chapter 42 . 7/29/2014
I have loved it! I had to skip chapter 4 and the first part of the funeral because I was on the plane and closed the chapter's page but couldn't bring myself to wait and real later.
So you a very good real, original but in canon I found. Severus so true to himself despite lots of unusual stuff he does. Nice plot, humour and emotion. Thanks a lot!
Bergère
Sarah chapter 42 . 7/22/2014
I loved this. Snape-Hermione are my favourite fanfic couple.
I LOVE your story, every other one I have read has basically been a graphic porno, but your was beautifully written and captivating. I could not stop reading!
articcat621 chapter 42 . 7/20/2014
A sweet story. I'm glad Hermione and Severus got their happy ending. I'm pleased Lucius got his happy ending as well!
roni2010 chapter 42 . 7/19/2014
Great ending! love it!
roni2010 chapter 41 . 7/19/2014
So happy for Lucius & Julia! Happy that Severus's express his love for Hermione!
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