Reviews for An Avalanche |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY! However, I would LOVE more of the story and to find out if heather ever gets with someone. |
![]() ![]() You realise that receiving Voldemort's corpse can restore the parselmouth gift. |
![]() ![]() *Heather not Feather |
![]() ![]() Rita corpse will just awaken their animagus forms. Voldemort's corpse will restore Harry's parselmouth Ability and may awaken dormant bloodline traits like the Black family metamorphagus ability in Draco. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was pretty good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() your characterization of Heather is very inconsistent. she has powerful magics but she's easily taken out by wolves (stupefy and incarcerous alone could get rid of them), she has the gift of speed and reflexes but she's easily subdued by regular warriors, she embodies courage and bravery but disapparation is her first thought when given signs of aggression. really breaks any of her developments. |
![]() ![]() And this is how the assassin creed was created . JK this is so good thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I can't wait to see where this goes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Poor teddy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I kinda love elrond being so confused |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I love that Faramir is in a better position to subtly fight his awful father |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I'm completely fine not seeing all of them in relationships yet. They're still doing so many things that they only have so much time |
![]() ![]() ![]() Draco needing this contract is still a little weird to me and him being a man makes me think that he doesn't completely understand why hermione doesn't like the idea of basically being sold. At least luna was there to help cause I doubt Draco would want a furious hermione on him cause she hates the contract |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay is hermione okay will this whole contract idea cause I don't think I would be (especially with them doing it without me there with my imput). Even though Draco has her interests in mind it still does treat her like property in my mind |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah hermione kick Saruman out! Draco might wanna be carful calling her sensitive for not being included when he'd react the same way in her place I'm pretty sure |