|Reviews for You See the Battlefield|
| Mari Wollsch chapter 8 . 2/27
great story, can't wait for more xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
| KKK3 chapter 8 . 2/27
I love this story!
| Godiva9 chapter 8 . 2/23
A really interesting story, I look forward to reading more! : )
| random lurker chapter 8 . 2/21
I am so glad you decided to update.
| Astrido chapter 8 . 2/18
cute, the scene with anthea was nice.
| Random Flyer chapter 8 . 2/17
Thanks for the chapter! It was well written with some nice incite into Mycroft. I wish it was a little longer, though. The first part with Moriarty helped move the plot along, but a little more story movement in the rest of the chapter would help, I think.
Thanks again! Looking forward to the next update!
| Beloved Daughter chapter 8 . 2/16
Love the chapter update! John's impact on Mycroft really is remarkable as is the Holmes' impact upon John. :)
| littleelfmom chapter 8 . 2/15
Love the story. Read all 8 chapters and am eagerly awaiting more.
| Tamuril2 chapter 8 . 2/15
Tam: *sniffs* She has redeemed herself.
Lastrade: *groans* Not this again. It's been ages since the last update and you're STILL going on about Anthea's snub on John?
John: *pops in* Greg, apologize. Now! Before *glances at Tam* rants begin.
Lastrade: *gulps* S-sorry, Tam, I...you know how I get without caffeine.
Tam: *smirks* Fine, but we'll be having a 'discussion' later on today.
1) I have now officially forgiven Anthea. *grins sheepishly* Okay, I never really hated her...that much...I just get protective of my...err...BBC's boys. *glares at lawyers* Back, you leeches, back I say! *flees* I think Anthea's doing a great job of making up for her snub though!
2) Aw, Mycroft was relaxed enough to blurt out something he didn't intend to. *melts* Perfect.
3) *sniffles* Poor Sherlock. I'm sad he feels the need to push John so, but I can understand it. *smiles* More showing of this, please? I really want to see Sherlock do something that makes Donovan or Anderson or even Greg upset, but not John. Then afterward, John pulls Sherlock aside and explains he can stop testing him, he's not going anywhere. Then Sherlock can get all surprised/ kick puppy looking. It'll be awesome!
4) Moriarty! Nuff said.
All in all? Please, as if I need say it anymore. *blinks* Oh, I do? *blushes* Okay then...I love it to pieces. Thanks for updating. :D
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/15
I had started reading this story awhile ago, but for some reason thought it was abandoned. So glad to find this update! John's interactions with Mycroft and Anthea are great. I like the back story you've created for John and his past connection with Mycroft.
| randomplotbunny chapter 8 . 2/15
Fantastic chapter! Loved the interaction between John and Mycroft, as well as between John and Anthea.
| CG07 chapter 8 . 2/15
You have just made my day. THANK YOU!
| viridianaln9 chapter 8 . 2/14
I like the chapter, poor John all shocked out of his mind. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/6
Please continue this story, just one thing though, her name is Anthea not Athena. Just a spell check typo.
| newboy chapter 7 . 1/4
I have been reading your stories involving Watson, they are very well done. If you want to get things even more exciting, you could have Sebastian Moran show up. He could be the enemy to Watson, that Moriarty is to Sherlock.