Reviews for Brother, I Think I Love You
Taco John chapter 10 . 10/25/2014
Wow! That was a good story. Please write more between Mephisto & Amaimon. I would love to see a Amaimon & Rin story too!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Omg. Sebastian was amazing! Love the idea!
Guest chapter 10 . 7/8/2014
So I'm a bit lazy and don't feel like logging in for this, however I felt the need to give you a bit of constructive criticism for review...
As you probably know, most mephimon stories here on our wonderful , are... well overall not very well written, and many have very similar scenes like I've read in others. So entering this fic, I had lowered my expectations quite a bit, but I am surprisingly pleased to say this fic kept me up until two in the morning! It excited me! Now I will say I feel a bit guilty reading these things, because, well, they're brothers! But I HAVE read many, and this was a good fic, all things considered. By that, I mean you have hardly a competition, a ship more popular with more fics, then that might be a different story. Now although I enjoyed your fic, there are some things I'd stay weary of next time: First, try not to make too many scenes based on other fics. This may be another fic coppying you, but the entire begining scene I had read earlier that day in another fic, making me a little suspicious of the two fic writers, not that you're certainly to blame for this. Another thing, spell check is always great, because readers catch every mistake, even if you think it's unnoticable. It's also great to find an editor (maybe a friend or sibling or something). Also, I think the idea of anime cameos is fun, however once actually in fine print, it seems a little sloppy. All therandomness in your fic didn't really sync with me, just left me
yaoi lover chapter 9 . 6/25/2014
What do you think of rin x amaimon?
Ash Likes Lemons chapter 9 . 6/23/2014
I love it! So many cross overs and the brotherly love! Though I have a question: what anime is Helljack from? But anyway THERE MUST BE MORE! Im wondeing if Fate Stay Night should make an appearance XD I can see Gilgamish having fun with Satan XD
Blood Valentine chapter 7 . 6/20/2014
love the picture
puggle5468 chapter 9 . 6/17/2014
XD why do I always get shout outs? kinda weird and hmm... seems like he was *shrugs* oh well! Its funny how I talk about him like he's a girl lol btw thanks -
puggle5468 chapter 8 . 6/17/2014
Well according to some restaurants that I've went to strawberry wine exists. so yup! It sure does!
puggle5468 chapter 4 . 6/17/2014
Ugg... why do I ship it... but it's such a cute pairing that it's just not possible for me NOT to! also Amaimon, is it THAT time of month again? think he's on his period! ;3 XD and this is an awesome fic so far!
Girilove chapter 7 . 6/9/2014
w to be honest I never thought I would enjoy cameo's but there rather entertaining as well as your oc. I look forward to reading more, god luck and keep up the great work!
JuJu-chan the Vampire chapter 6 . 5/27/2014
[swearing her heart out about the stupid cliffhanger] DUDE. THE CRAP. DUDE. AAAAHHHHHHH. No but in all seriousness, I love it and cannot wait for an update. XD 3 LOVE IT!
ShootingStars97 chapter 6 . 5/12/2014
Not a cliffhanger! How could you?!
Guest chapter 4 . 5/3/2014
*fangirling*awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so Kawii
Rainb0wNinja chapter 4 . 5/3/2014
*Drools* naked Amaimon O_O Ah, I love seeing him so emotional. Well, reading about it at least. I wonder what's going to happen at the fair...sounds like there will be fluff. Yay :D
Guest chapter 3 . 5/1/2014
I love you so much for puting in Fairy Tail
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