|Reviews for Past an Hour the Prospect's Black|
| ak chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
| Endgames chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Huh, that's certainly... creative thinking. That did seem kind of weird that in canon they couldn't find mentions of the bubblehead charm. I feel like it would be more likely that they did find it, but couldn't get it to work since it's such an advanced charm. I like Fleur's reaction here though.
| Nothorse chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Neat. An interesting divergence to the standard way of the second task.
| Vegasman59 chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
That was fun, Why would a child that did nothing but chores and be abused all his life have been even taught to swim the damnable Dursleys would have let Harry drown if he fell in.
| serenityselena chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
interesting twist :)
| Half Alien chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
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| Slytherin66 chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
This was good and well said about the egg Harry gets laughed at in the books for his moral fiber yet given how frantic Fleur was I don't think Harry was the only one to believe his treasure would be lost forever.
The tasks were poorly done for those watching the tournament 4th year would be rather dull for everybody not a champion.
The tournament does pose many legal issues had the hostages been hurt or killed there would have been an international incident.
| geetac chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
I liked the story
| Gruffard chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
Very interesting spin. I have seen a lot of stories on 4th year or the tourney, but his takes the cake on original. I am glad I found it.