This was not as good as part 1, I was bored for most of it, I hope part 3 is better.

Just like the first book, there were spelling and grammar errors throughout the story, still not too bad though. I do wonder what ever happened with Winky & Dobby wanting an elfling? I think it was mentioned in Book 1, but it might've been early in Book 2. (Reading them one after the other has kind of made them blend together in my head.) Either way, after it was mentioned, it was never brought up again. I don't understand the necessity of killing off Sirius at this point in time or why his death was so simple, anticlimactic, and fairly pathetic. Especially compared to the deaths he had already escaped. I liked the first book much better than the second. At this point in time, I will not be continuing to the third book.

Oh my god. That took me on a journey. I very much enjoyed it. I look for books to bring me in to another world. You fic has done that. Thank you and keep up the good work.

I’ve been reading this after the first one ah think it’s marvellous ! It’s Christmas Day an a little lonely since my wife passed away. Reading this has really cheered me up! Best fanfic I’ve ever read

Can’t wait to read the third

It all flows seamlessly

I love this books, I understand that you decided to kill Sirius, but it’s so sad, I’m not going to keep reading the rest because of it, but still good work.

What a great story!

Love your story

I am not sure I can stomach any more of the horror.

A pegasus only has wings. An alicorn is the proper term for a winged horse with a horn.

Why in the hell is Harry not reporting the gap in the wards to his father?

on to book three

so so sad

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thanks

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