Beautiful story so far.

Is Daphne/Harry the pairing? This work was archived under "Harry Potter & Ginny Weasley 100% fav collections," so I was under the impression that this fanfic . . . you know . . . actually had Harry and Ginny as the main pairing.

Correction on review from last story. I will hate you if you abandon book three.

Apologies for messy review. Writing on phone which makes me lazy.

These two books have been truly an enjoyable ride - well, for the most part, getting back to negatives later. The world, the characters, plot that partly keeps me guessing, partly makes me groan in frustration when characters just don't get it! You have done great work here. I love wizarding culture stories a lot, and you easily make it in my top 5 stories in the genre.

Oh, I do hate you for killing Sirius though - though wonder why Harry didn't feel the death as he did previously. Hmm!

I was sort of hoping for Edvard to make a reappearance - oh, and I was so sure the library scene in Durmstrang was an elaborate plot to have the vampire slaughter Hermione. In a way I'm glad I was mistaken.

Random thoughts aside, your biggest failing with these books are your atrocious lack of use of commas, wrong words and the occasional typo. In short, I believe you badly need a proofreader. It would increase the reading experience tenfold.

Still, though, I have enjoyed reading this a lot, and I look forward to starting book three! Happy writing!

I have searched high and low for good quality fics where Harry goes to another school, it's really cool that Harry got to experience both other schools for a good long while! It saddens me that the Beauxbatons was a bit of a let down, I always romanticize that school in my head.

I loved that Harry and Hermione embraced the darker nature of Durmstrang instead of fighting it tooth and nail and that this has made them stronger. The ending is incredibly sad but I think it will set the right tone for the next book. I really hope that Harry's "relationship" with Daphne grows into something more than what it is now.

The scenes in the cell where very well done and the reveal of the unnamed cellmate shocked me, and I think it's good that he didn't release him.

I can't wait to see what the next book has in store for the characters. Thank you so much for all your hard work I loved every minute of reading this amazing story!

Ask for the archives in the ROR

Thank Gif you didn’t kill Sirius. If you had I would have dropped this book

Wait is that albus and Scorpius from the future?!

Loving the story so far. Lots of spelling mistakes:
Passed used almost exclusively wrongly when it should be past e.g. walk past someone, drive past, stroll past, not “walk passed”
Your used wrongly for you’re.
Of and off mixed up.
Too and to mixed up.
Loose used wrongly instead of lose.
There used wrongly instead of their.
Whole work needs a spelling and grammar check.
Thankfully no then and than mix-ups

No school would ever have different tuition plans for their students, that's a rather stupid idea. You cannot expect someone to pay more for the same service or goods than another person. The only way to lower the cost for some and increase it for others would be to implement a cost per credit system.

You cannot be the Foreign Minister and an ambassador at the same time.

This chapter is a overly contrived mess of awkward phrasing, typos, and wooden dialogue. There are a number of things going on that lack depth, particularly Harry and Hermione's reactions to Ron and Lavender's relationship. The reactions Harry and Hermione have seem disproportionate to what is going on and what appears to have been going on for awhile. Plus there has not been any significant connection shown between Ron and Hermione, just out of place jealousy here and there.

I could be wrong but It would seem that this chapter was either put in either wrong or misnamed because it and chapter 23 which seems to have a title that makes sense for the chapter are exact copies of each other in regard for story content.

I really expected Sirus death to be more poignant, but it just felt empty. I'm glad be didn't die that night Albus died in the books... to cliche, but without the description of the fight it feels like he was just asscinated except he had his wand in his hand.

it took me a while to finish the cave chapter, because I feared you'd kill Sirius that night, but how you did kill him was far worse. I'm so disappointed. I'm not sure I will be able to continue.

Wow, what an ending. Please don't abandon. Look forward to seeing how you will end it. Great, great story. Thanks for sharing!