Reviews for Harry Potter and the Peverell Legacy |
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G Fawkes chapter 10 . 7/11 Flitwick just finished saying they were going to go through the spells they already knew. Beginning with the first spell they EVER learned. You don't think they would have gone in ORDER, continuing with ALL of the first year spells, before advancing to second year, some other day, and then third, fourth, etc., at some later time? (I bet all those commas nearly exploded your brain, right?) I doubt SEVERELY, that that they went from a first year spell, to a second, then a third, and then a summoning charm. (which is BEYOND fourth year level. Harry had to learn it for the Tournament, not as fourth year curriculum.) |
G Fawkes chapter 8 . 7/11 Harry can't Captain quidditch, OR lead the D.A. if he's in France or Norway.,And McGonnagall wrote BOTH letters. |
G Fawkes chapter 8 . 7/11 Victor still has his "regular" Professional team he plays for, when it is NOT a World Cup year, that he has to practice with and they DO have a season to prepare for and games to play. Just like with the REAL Olympic athletes, everyone has a team they play for. Baseball, Soccer, volleyball, water polo,NHL Hockey in the winter games. NBA basketball.. It's not just about making a National team. It's suspending and interrupting MANY professional leagues, that have to wait for their players to return. Thousands of people are affected and millions of dollars in revenue can be lost... Hopefully regained through goodwill, and attention their stars command on a World stage. |
G Fawkes chapter 6 . 7/10 BORDERS! NOT boarders! Borders are the divide between lands. Towns, States, countries, etc. Boarders are people who get on a train, boat or plane. "All aboard!" Get it? - You need a third person to "bind" an unbreakable vow. Andromeda couldn't do that vow by herself. (Read a book) |
G Fawkes chapter 5 . 7/10 And he also wanted a shot at dat' ass! |
G Fawkes chapter 3 . 7/10 Aw! Maybe the girl wolf will want to come live at Harry's rebuilt manor house. Be a big house doggy. Oh, And some gryffins. |
TheLoneDoctorVII chapter 53 . 7/8 Bloody hell. That's a chilling ending to this book. Literally screamed and cried at the last couple chapters. |
tawnya.penner chapter 4 . 6/27 Excellent! Loving it so far! |
Purebloodgodess chapter 53 . 6/16 Not me reading the last few chapters on Father's Day.P2 was amazing! I look forward to P3. |
lotusknight chapter 20 . 6/2 I think it would be brilliant if you did a story with harry going to this form of durmstrang with sirius instead of hogwarts |
Bosmer1701 chapter 51 . 5/22 I loved the first story of this series. I'm glad I skipped most of this story. It annoyed the fuck out of me. |
Chgrne chapter 42 . 5/17 one can tolerate an impotent harry for only so long |
Chgrne chapter 38 . 5/15 really this deep into the war and we're still anti-killing? grow up. |
RaiDaniels chapter 53 . 5/14 Thanks a lot for all your effort! Great job! |
ffgandalf chapter 1 . 5/7 How is the edits going for part 2? I absolutely devoured the first part. |