Reviews for The Trajectory of Laughter
BeautifulCherryBlossom chapter 46 . 9/21
I wish the whole memory loss situation didn't happen, but that Miyuki had the dream and that they lived happily ever after as the best battery ever.
wiipuu chapter 46 . 6/22
Awww man. I knew what was going to happen to sawamuras memories... BUT I WAS REALLY HOPING IT WOULDN'T.
Paty S chapter 29 . 6/17
Mitsuki poor guy lol
Great chapter
Paty S chapter 28 . 6/17
He is fine, thank God. I hope he recovers well.
Great chapter
Paty S chapter 27 . 6/17
I'm glad they won but I hope Sawamura is ok..
Great chapter
Paty S chapter 26 . 6/17
Damn what a cliffhanger...I hope Sawamura is ok.
Great chapter
Paty S chapter 25 . 6/17
I love seeing there relationship develop and some people figuring it out something is going on.
Great chapter
Paty S chapter 23 . 6/17
This chapter was pretty funny and the girls talk turned interesting ways :)
Great chapter and so far this story has been pretty good and sad.
ERROR 404 Porn Not Found chapter 46 . 6/8
thank u for the extra... I hope Kuramochi will trll mr what the battery has done in the storage room...
Lunary chapter 46 . 6/4
Good chapter :)

Love to read more and can't wait to read more :)

They're good together and even if one has all his memories left intact and the other not, they make it work.

I love them together

Regards,
Lunary
NatalieMcLarent chapter 46 . 6/3
Oh my god! I am so shocked when I see that you update thisthank you for the extra chapter..
UnpredictablyRandomOne chapter 46 . 6/3
I never thought I'd see an update for this. I honestly shed a tear or two when I saw the email and thought maybe you'd added an author's note but realized it was an extra chapter.
I knew they would be fine, I had faith in their love but to actually read it just made my heart super content. Thank you so much for sharing another piece to this beautiful story. As before, I know they'll continue to strive together and live happily ever after.
Thank you once again!
greymouser chapter 46 . 6/3
Thank you very much for this extra chaper. This one tho made my appetite for more. I really love this story.
Zeke Jones chapter 3 . 4/1
well, I didn't read this for a long while because the summary made me think it was gonna be pure yaoi crap... since I was super bored tonight I mangaed to get this far and i'm currently enjoying it somewhat, skimming thru the romancey/drama crap to focus on the baseball side of things XD. since there have been no overt mention of homosexuality yet, I'm hoping that Sawamura considers Miyuki a BRO, not a potential boyfriend, and the romance part may come from one of the managers or something, but I honestly dont have high hopes of that... Guess i'll just willfully ignore that part of the story.
What I really came to say was, that there's no fucking way Sawamura could pitch like he just did that game. One thing is to know how to do that, a very different thing is to have the body conditiong and muscle memory to actually do it... As it is, with his first year body that lacks every basic training, he can not throw much faster than he did in canon with technique alone, and while a month could be enough to let him regain his 4S, Ch and cutter, since you had him moping all damn month and not training to master it, his fingers would not be used to those positions and his control would be shot to hell.
Baseball is not chess or Go, that are mental sports only... the body is the most important part.
Besides, he could become the Ace over Furuya with speeds of around 130km/h (which is something that he could gain before the summer tournament with proper technique and body training), if he has those 3 types of balls and the control he could gain to throw to the 4 corners.
All this would not only make the story more believable, but it would also give him something to work for. Train his body for speed, and, now that we know how the manga goes, the numbers he can gain while training with Miyuki previous and during the tournament...all that could allow him to get to the finals of Koshien, like Inajitsu did during canon, with speeds no higher than 135km/h.

Well, all this rant would probably be moot anyways, since while it would be easier to edit here for this chapter, I have no idea what you did in the future ones, and would probably be a pain in the ass to change so much even if I could convince you that it would be better. Still, I wanted to say it.
RyuuenXKai chapter 45 . 2/27
What. Who's POV is in the epilogue?

...and what about Koshien playing Sawamura?

..I'm feeling kinda unsatisfied...
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