Love the right touch of the pen writing a perfect love scene!

How does this story get even better with each chapter? I love from the beginning to the end, the way Kate waking up to Castle's touch, how comfortable she is with his family, how you used the dialogue from the show and turned it into something better, they way they make love. Everything, really. I love everything.

but what I love most is how you can actually feel them growing closer to each other while still staying in characters and it's so beautiful. Well done, my friend. *bows down*

I lied. *this* is my favourite chapter. I love everything about it. "You love me? .. I love you too" I could totally see season 2 Beckett saying this. I guess this is one of the things I love about this story, how they still true to the characters and you write them so well

Oh my... So, so beautiful. I think this might be my favourite chapter yet. The way she asks him to stay is just so sweet i am totally in love *heart*

Holy smokes! This was way too hot! Precinct bathroom sex might be my favourite ;) i'm debating whether i should take a cold shower now or wait till i'm all caught up with the story.,

Great story! I started last night and glad I caught up this morning before work!

Wonderful story! Thanks for writing!

Awwwh , so sweet! Hate 2 see it finishing tho :( Fi

This was awesome!

Thank you

as much as I hate too see the story go, it does feel completed. kate is in love and finally happy.

Love! This was absolutely perfect:)

Dawww... super sweet.

Loved how you have got them to this point
You love me."

"I do," she confirmed, a lovely little smile flirting along the edges of her lips.
and the rewrite was just adorable!
thanks

I don't think I've mentioned yet how utterly fantastic your mixing of canon and AU is, especially the dialogue. I love the pieces you've picked up from the show, how you've woven them and your own, what a beautiful picture it all paints together. Looking forward to the final chapter, but this has been a great read for me today.

Just gorgeous. I love how you've written her coming to terms with her feelings, revealing them in the aftermath of the Coonan shooting- mirrors Always, and that's no bad thing.