Nice au. Any thoughts of conti using? Although it is fine the way it is.

This was awesome, I loved it the whole way through.

I'm glad someone asked you the question about your fav fanfic you have written. Just found this and loved it. Adding to my favs list now!

I always thought it would be especially nice if they didn't have to hide it so long! This was a very enjoyable love story!

This works for me! I was wondering if you would take it as far as the Demming episodes! This story clearly doesn't need to go there, and if it does, it seems that they are sufficiently in love to weather any hurdle such as him!

Very, very beautiful chapter! When they say they love each other, it doesn't get much better!

She asked him to stay! And she didn't miss what he said and still drifted off into blissful sleep? That's great!

He'll give her the release she needs, but he has to have the kiss! That part must feel like love to him. It would to me.

Of course he loves her! And maybe Martha knows more than he thinks she does!

She spent the night with him! And kissed him goodbye! And gave thought to leaving a change of clothes at his place! Big time progress!

She wants to be ready! That was huge!

Good chapter!

It finally feels different to her! She doesn't want him to leave! And he never just wants to leave! He only leaves because he thinks its what she wants him to do! He wants to stay, Kate! All you have to do is ask him.

She knows it means so much more to him. Smiling after his kiss goodbye was kind of sweet. When she speaks to him, its softly. Things are changing for Miss Beckett.

Not sure what is going on in Kate's head right now! She wouldn't have given herself to him like this without having major feelings for him, but she won't share them with him and I never expect her to. Keeping the flowers was the thing that struck me the hardest, I think. To me, that move spoke of love, however little it might have been.

Heck of a chapter!

So perfect.