Loved this whole story!
Really amazing tiwsts and turns that were unexpected but made total sense, which is high quality writing indeed.

Just wants to let you know that in chapter 84 of victors chronicles, you have vigos partners' name as a Dento something, not Valerie. Also, as we found out here with "Wesley togisala, 91st " that it says on his grave in the tribute memorial cemetery. I would kind of like to know Kyla togisala's brothers name. or, more specifically, how naisha togisala doesn't remember her cousins name, especially since it seems like the graves in the tribute memorials have the names of the tributes on them. Or were they not naisha's cousins but her late husbands', Ava's fathers cousins?

Aaah, this was a wonderful story. Ava is quite the spunky little heroine, loved the relationship with Chel, the talk of rebellion, and the ending with Vigo.

A little confusing why Wes doesn't know Katniss' name - surely he knows the name of the woman who saved his mother's life?

I absolutely loved this story! I was heartbroken at the fact that Wes died so soon, I almost cried! But I really liked Ava's character development and how she won't allow herself to be broken or contained by the Capitol. I also liked the ending scene with Vigo and Ava. Overall, amazing job!

Nice Story. Really liked Ava. And Chel, she was awesome. Told u I would try to review, but I am an awful reviewer, but as I promised!
I readed, 74-75 and finishing 91st in less than... 3 weeks? That means something! I like the way you do not stop in unnecesary things, and go straight to the point.
I always expected each tribute to have its own mentor (if its possible), but it is nice for a victor to be able to retire after you produce another victor to replace you in mentoring.
Katniss have been so out of this story, I expected her in the begining to go to the Capitol as at least the mentor for Wes, but as you changed that, she is like so out of the story.
I think her victory its so recent in a district as small like 12, she should be remembered more, when in the begining they are not even able to remember her name. It's been 16 years. And she is around, and appears at every reaping. To add as a nice fact, District 12, has produced 3 victors in 16 years. Its a real great average (almost 1/5) counting that they had 2 in 74! (Statistics are my thing). One thing I always would like to know its how popular a tribute or victor can become. I mean, in the Final 4 of this games, with Iris, Chel, Ava and Chaco, I bet that Chel or even Iris were way much popular than Ava, maybe the bird thing helped her, but I don't see her like a social success. I always expected the life as a victor at least when they are in the Capitol to be more fanbased, like a Popstar. I recall from the original trilogy, Katniss saying that if the win she would so freaking rich, that could pay someone to hearing for her (after she gets almost def from the explosion), and even in the movies we see the people really cheering for them in the Quell.
Just thoughts!
I LOVE to read that you have plenty of stories on the way. So let the fun contiues! Thanks for your work!

Ok, I'm all done, so her we go...

I enjoyed the depth of the victory tour and then epilogue. It showed me how Ava was coping and also the promising of another uprising. Reading Ava interacting with Vigo was nice too because they really understand each other and I'm glad you created a character to help and guide her.

I loved Chel and Junichi- the idea of breaking the stereotypes of District 2 and the Capitol were something that made the story better, I think, especially with Chel. She was literally the opposite of the careers and I really liked her philosophical remarks which she made now and again. I found it quite funny when we discovered Junichi was a martial arts master, because it's so unrealistic but still could be true!

Usually I'd pop in some constructive criticism here, but for the second time (and your second story), I haven't got any! So keep doing what you do and I'll be happy :)

I'm looking forward to reading 92 & 93 next, I just hope they are as good as 91 is!

Thank you for taking the time to read my review, I really appreciate it.

-NTC

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Omg... This is such a wonderful story! Had my heart pumping and racing reading it all day... All the pain she went through, it breaks my heart. Awesome and well done!

This is the best fan fiction I have ever read you should be proud chel

Wooohoo! Nice way to round things off. Great work!

Aww, so sweet. Very powerful, fantastic job. If I were writing this, I would've cried too.

Lol I saw this and went, "The 91st games? What the heck?" but ok.. haha I just didn't expect another update.

First, I love the premise. Id Katniss never volunteered!
I love how Ava just shrugs when her name is called, and wow! Both of them are picked!
Very good writing!

Fantastic ending.

That's all I can really say. :-)

Simply fantastic

The Katniss and Ava chat was great :-)

Chive was a big surprise. I was like WTF!