Reviews for Volunteer 13
nikkib64 chapter 11 . 7/31
Thank you vor a beautiful story.
FeMcB chapter 11 . 7/12
Loved this story! SO sweet!
gameplayer17 chapter 11 . 6/16
This fanfic , has held me captive from the first chapter . I'm in love with plot and it's heart , and soul .
thank you so much for writing this and I can't wait to see what elts is to be written over time .
bluemonkeypie66 chapter 4 . 6/9
I know this is about a year old now but I really love it awesome job. This story is hilarious and sexy and no other words can describe the awesomeness that is this fanfic. Amazing job well done.
ChristyWIX chapter 11 . 6/3
I freaking loved this ending! The dates every other month and through the years, was absolutely precious. What a wonderful idea. I adored the book of memories and flowers. Such and amazing thing to look back on when she is older. Her own notes of the dates, to remember the little things. Really, just an amazing chapter. A really fantastic ending to a wonderful little story. Makes me want to see that video all over again. ~Christy
ChristyWIX chapter 10 . 6/3
A nanny is definitely in order . . . too many babies! They have so much love in their own hearts and in their family . . . these wee ones will be well taken care of, that's for sure. That gift from Rose sounded fantastic! What a great idea. Awwww, I loved the full circle part at the ending . . . "Bella, can I try one thing?" . . . "Anything" . . . sigh. Just loved that.
ChristyWIX chapter 9 . 6/3
I loved that she moved in with him so soon . . . yay! Absolutely loved the proposal. It was sweet and rather romantic. Out in their meadow with Zen and him hand picking the wildflowers . . . placing the ring in there amidst them . . . awwww. Too many babies, all at once! Goodness . . . are you trying to kill them both before they get to enjoy life . . . hahaha. Well, I get once and done could work to their advantage. Geez, they will be busy.
ChristyWIX chapter 8 . 6/3
Another amazing chapter! Such love and passion . . . GAH! Loved how he was eyeballing the blanket from the back seat, when they were sitting outside his parents house . . . her being green. Too funny. Not funny about her real fear, just funny about his reaction. Then his family absolutely loving her, as he knew they would. Interesting to learn that his parents met, fell hard and got engaged so soon after meeting. At least they understand. It's ridiculously hard to explain that, to someone who has never felt it. I loved how him hearing her speaking to Rose made him practically run out of his parents house and back to his. Such passion. What a fantastic scene you wrote when they were in bed. Yummy! I loved his little admission at the end . . . he'll send her a ILY text tomorrow only this one won't be a mistake. She liked it! Yay!
ChristyWIX chapter 7 . 6/3
I swear there is magic in your fingertips . . . the writing in the chapter was fantastic! I really loved the shower scene. His admission to how much easier it looks in porn . . . her giggles . . . it was an extremely fun scene to read. I was thinking he needed some non skid help there in the shower . . . then Bella gave him that idea . . . so problem solved. I love how fast they've fallen for each other. I mentioned this before in another of your stories. When you know, you know. My husband and I fell hard and fast . . . the very first week we were together. Seriously, in about four days. We are still very much in love and it's been twenty-five years, this past March.
ChristyWIX chapter 6 . 6/2
Wow, first they rode out to the meadow and then they rode each other. That was an amazing first time for them. I don't think these two could do sweet and loving for their first time. This was just what these two needed . . . hot and passionate. I liked that you still gave us the date but, in him remembering it from the night before. Same with their ride out to the meadow, him remembering it. Really cool way to tell a story. I liked that aspect. They didn't make it back to his bed . . . she was all over him quite soon . . . can't say I blame her.
ChristyWIX chapter 5 . 6/2
I love his point of view! GAH! Waking up, with her in his arms, hard . . . so hot. Then he got worried when she wasn't in the bed . . . just to be really taken by finding her in his kitchen, with his name on her back. Yeah, that was just incredibly hot. He sent flowers! His accidental ILY was great! Alice laughing at her brother was a lot of fun too. Bella giving him crap about how she reserved the church but, hadn't put money on food yet, was so funny. The way he attacks her with those fuck hot kisses whenever he sees her . . . YUM!
ChristyWIX chapter 4 . 6/2
So, so, so delicious. I am really loving this one. The pull you are describing in this, is dead on point. When you find your other half, THIS is what you feel. You've nailed it. Instantly knowing you've met the person you'll spend the rest of your life loving. I liked the getting to know each other part of this chapter. Sad that she's lost her parents. Really liked learning about his family too. How he'd wanted to be a vet his whole life, practically. Loving her internal thoughts coming out of her mouth. Fun stuff.
ChristyWIX chapter 3 . 6/2
I laughed so much and so often in this chapter, my husband asked me what was so funny. Such a funny chapter. Rose and Bella's conversation, funny. Emmett coming for lunch, with no lunch, very funny. Then that whole exchange with Alice and Edward, fantastic! Thank you for making me laugh so much.
ChristyWIX chapter 2 . 6/2
This was fantastic! Floved the EPOV, as I always do. It was great how much he liked her right from when he accidentally stomped on her. Him running to the drug store to get things to fix her, along with the mints. Yay! Then that full on make out session . . . and Rose excusing herself from the room . . . HA! Him asking her out and she agreed. So fun! Loving this.
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 6/2
I remember this video. I was one of the people that begged for it to be put I a fic! Thank you so much for doing this. I'm loving it right off the bat. I'm worried about what the two of them just signed though. Hope it wasn't something to the effect that they can't meet outside of the filming until it airs. I'm going way out on a limb here, kidding, and saying he's the one that accidentally stomped on her hand.
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