yo it's been awhile but I finally caught up and even after all this time this still in my top fanfic.

i know it's hard to keep writing, the series been on hiatus for awhile and the author been beating around the Bush about finishing it.

whatever you go with your fic I'll still read. you al we always keep it interesting. can't wait for the next chapter.

First it starts tragic but ends beautifully. Great job can’t wait to see how the lemon goes!

Sucks

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Update needed please
Love this fanfiction right amount of everything and love the DMC references

hey old friend this is blazeking,fanfiction erase my account for what ever fucking reason. now I got to follow all the stories again. i forgot what chapter i was on so I'll read from the beginning again

Update please need to see what's happening next.

On top of you clearly being mentally damaged, this isn't a crossover. Some dogshit OC you stole a name for doesn't equate a crossover you vapid fucking moron.

Even the summary is written like you can't read. No one should waste their time reading this dogshit.

BTW, it's a decent read to pass time IMO, but it's all over the place and not consistent.

Also, there is an AI in the app version that you can use to fix grammar if it's not your main language. I don't know about the website, though.

Ima drp it here if you ever decide to rewrite this i think it would be a great fic and inwould read it again

So naruto ajd setalizer dont know what attia meant with big jugs? I feel
Like the baive and dense aproach is stupid if you make naruto smarter and more capm in this dimension

Like make a choice is he dumb or not?

And then there is naruto literally insulting miyabi every time as a slut a harlot a whore

I dont think you keep up with tour own character you have to be consistend with his personality and up until now since chapter 1 his personality is everywhere but consistant

Im saying this so ya know either you can re wrtie it one day and see the reviews for tips or just maoe small edits cuz its cool but i dont think many people will keep reading with these factors ive mentioned and some i havent

Again not insult or hate

So after all that, Naruto says "stop fighting" and they work together, and it works? It's not the problem, though. TBH, I like it, but she tried so many times, and Naruto isn't dumb, so he could probably connect the dots. I'm just disappointed by his response. Imagine your yandere sister is trying to kill your new best friend. I expected a different response, TBH. Maybe not hate, but some anger and character development.

Still Great Chapter

I dont kike arnett

There are a lot of missing words in the chapters so far

"It's refreshing to see look so handsome."
It should be "It's refreshing to see HIM look so handsome."

"He never looked or looks at as an object. I must do the same."
It should be "He never looked or looks at ME as an object. I must do the same."

Just a heads up cuz it's noticeable and easy to fix.

Arnett being an overprotective sister is annoying, ngl. Especially if she will do this with every girl Naruto talks to. I know she will be in his harem, but still.
Also, too many POV changes.