|Reviews for Brock & Miroku: The Irony|
| PEJP BengtZone V2 chapter 8 . 5/8
I hope the father got his just desserts.
| PEJP BengtZone V2 chapter 4 . 5/4
Why did not Pikachu electrocute the harassers?
| PEJP BengtZone V2 chapter 3 . 5/4
| zoilalove12 chapter 9 . 7/13/2015
Loved This story :) you should make a sequel where ash and his friends accidentally land in inuyasha world and have team rocket follow right behind them that would be great but it up to you :)
| bunearypony88 chapter 7 . 3/31/2015
Get back to fluttershy and the dragon Pokemon Please
| La Vik chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
You write dialogue really well! Definitely easy to follow as a reader. I think you could make the narration flow slightly smoother, maybe switch up the sentence structure a little more. You have a lot of skill building mood through your descriptions, and even though I only have a slight working knowledge of the fandoms, I was able to get a good feel of personality from your dialogue and descriptions. Very new-reader-friendly!