This story is very interesting, innovative and amazing! I really hope you will have more chapters in the near future soon since this story is getting good! Keep up the good work man! Hope you will finish making more chapters in the near future soon! I truly hope so!

Pitchfork

16 torches: 9 lit, 3 unlit, 4 extinguished.
12 pitchforks: 1 of which is on fire.
1 trident: don't know where this came from
1 Comment: Wonderful work, best of luck with the rest of the story.

Fare thee well.
- the_burnt_Huxley

Oh, Spike! Nooo!

It's a sad, sad day. But don't worry, I won't stop reading because of this.
I was rather intrigued by CLU's honeypot ploy with Feral; at least, I suspect it was a honey trap. CLU is quite devious.

I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Yay! Another chapter! I am greatly looking forward to seeing what Feral does in the Games. And... Feral finally somewhat got hers' with Castor :) I also loved the divergence back into the real world to see what's going on with Alan and how Feral's disappearance has effected the world. I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter, but you probably already knew that :)

I am so glad I found this story! Feral is an awesome, strong character that is very believable. I loved the scene with CLU, it was pretty intense. I think you are doing an excellent job, please update soon! I am itching to find out what happens next :)

aww spike saying no and beingmad is cute. lmao the lightcycle-tag.

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I HAET U SEW MUWCH

Don't worry, I can't hate you for this chapter. But I'm dying to be privy to their "talk". Something important changed between them.

OMG this turned out wonderfully! I'm so taken with what you've done with these two... More please! :D

Such an amazing chapter! my favorite so far. I love the lingering intimacy you create here with a simple code request. Sigh...

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POPIPOOOOOOOOOO
darn u cluuuuuu
but spike so kawaiii
lol rinzy u derpin over ferals hakin skillz

Aww...that last part was quite cute. I want a bit too...anyway I like Feral and her relationship with Rinzler. I was wondering if Sam was going to appear or no. I doubt that he would be, but I know know. I also like Clu's characterization and how much villainous he is as well. Grammatically, I didn't see any errors(probably reading too fast) and I like how the story is spaced out as well and not squished together.