Reviews for Heart Beatz
Brandon Daughert chapter 1 . 4/30
I've read a lot of " sad story's " that Naruto dies in and all but this story achaly made me cry this is now my favorite story :)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21
That was amazing, I almost cried which I only did twice reading a fanfic. Perhaps you can write more one shots.
Yifto chapter 1 . 12/13/2016
I was moved by your story. Normaly a one shot naruto death fic is pretty predictable. This one was no different, it had just enough angst and sadness to get to you yet stopped just before becoming emo territory. The story was quick enough to not drag on and long enough to get the emotions across. Nothing was really original about this story but it was, in my opinion, wich is the only one that matters in this review extremely well executed. I feel like I just gave you a back handed compliment but it's not like you took and almost over used concept riddled with clich├ęs and made the right blend to make it enjoyable. I've read 22 stories like this and when you get that far into a type of story it's all pretty familiar territory. at one point you only read them because it blends or reminds you of your first 8 but honestly, this may have renewed it for me. Thanks
rakkattack chapter 1 . 8/21/2016
this is one of the best short fanfics that i ever read it litterly made me cry a little
GentleRage chapter 1 . 3/7/2016
That was a very, very good one-shot.
Dragon Blaze-X chapter 1 . 1/23/2016
I cried A little bit thier
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
BEST FANFICTION EVER!
Silverwolf3351 chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
Fuck you sad endings... *sob* *sob* why?! so sad!? *sob*
destructo008 chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
This got me so emotional I cried a few tears.
Mikaeru346 chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
Even in his mindscape he can impregnate Kyuubi(with some help). What next, he will reincarnated himself so he can greet his wife and child. Nice
o0o00o0o0o chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
this is very good
Fullmetalxdovepaw chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
OMG THIS IS AWESOME
Thunderous Broadside chapter 1 . 5/21/2015
Dude, this murdered my heart. This was amazingly written, probably the saddest, also the beat, one shot I've read. I could've swore my eyes were sweating.
nero 44 chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
Sad,but awesome.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
Sequel. Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel Sequel! ! Pls
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