|Reviews for Child of the Virus|
| FractiousDay chapter 12 . 3/13
This is such a stupid story.
It started out well, but then rapidly degenerated into the sort of HFY you see all the time in ME. You, for some reason replaced Mercer with an SI who proceeds to do nothing of note that a human couldn't do in his place. Prototype has no effect on the story what so ever, and you've basically repeated the 'Ally with the Quarians, build Dyson spheres' storyline many other authors have, except this one's worse.
And the Turian Councillor's name is not 'Sparticus'. It's 'Sparatus'. One is a Roman slave who rebelled, the other is a alien. It's that sort of basic disrespect for the source material that brings the rest of the story down, as if the abysmal plot needed any help doing that
| FractiousDay chapter 4 . 3/12
This chapter in particular was much more difficult to understand.
| Fimconte chapter 10 . 3/4
Lazerhawk - Overdrive was playing while I read the combat scenes.
It fit perfectly.
| The romantic insanity chapter 13 . 1/24
Were all those Harry Potter references really necessary. Otherwise good chapter
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/17
Seems retarded. You could have told the exact same story using Alex. Your clone is a complete waste of space. It adds nothing.
| Guest chapter 14 . 12/1/2016
Oh fuck the collectors use blacklight!
| Galeiam chapter 3 . 5/8/2016
Eh...It's a bit too whimsical and anti-climatic at this popint to give a fair review.
I'll wait until some plot hooks show up.
| reinforced hell chapter 15 . 4/1/2016
Lol, Ghost in the machine!
| reinforced hell chapter 14 . 4/1/2016
What role does PARIAH play?
| reinforced hell chapter 9 . 4/1/2016
The Geth and Loa should be paired. I wonder what their children would be... HEPESTUS' grandchildren...
| reinforced hell chapter 8 . 4/1/2016
People seem to forget that Blacklight is an AI. An organic AI, but an AI nonetheless.
| ArchangleMV chapter 13 . 3/7/2016
Wait dragons! stop i want to hear more about that... Sorry dragon nut great story.
| Dazzle chapter 25 . 1/23/2016
Fun story. Thanks for writing!
| Goodpie2 chapter 18 . 1/23/2016
This has actually gotten quite boring. I honestly skipped the majority of this chapter. I hope the Dragon Age xover didn't get like this.
| Goodpie2 chapter 16 . 1/23/2016
THAT WAS AWESOME!
The omake, that is. The chapter was actually pretty damn boring.