|Reviews for Betrayal|
| jada951 chapter 19 . 8/24
you have some unique stuff going on in your story. I'd like to read more.
| Sliver of Melody chapter 19 . 8/22
Sweet! This is great
| GRACIE chapter 19 . 8/17
You should update! This story is great!
| V.M Potter-Black chapter 19 . 8/15
Loving this story
| Nyx Eryn chapter 18 . 8/10
Allan got to meet Jörmungandr
| Sailor Pandabear chapter 19 . 8/9
| reader1writer1 chapter 15 . 8/8
LOL so sweet
| reader1writer1 chapter 11 . 8/8
Great chapter. the kids are so sweet. I hope Al can be renamed and healed :)
| Vi38 chapter 19 . 8/7
| megipegi chapter 19 . 8/7
Great chapter, thank you for the update and I cannot wait for the next one!
| DragonsDreamer chapter 19 . 8/6
I love this story. The slow build and everything. Best part is that both will be fight their insecurities along the way. Yey.
| Merlenyn chapter 19 . 8/5
Uhoh... Obediah and the dark wizard! That's not looking good. I wonder what he was in it for? Hoping to steal Harry's power or something? And I hope they don't manage to get any more of that drug they used to keep Harry subdued... I'd love to see Harry wipe the floor with that dark wizard, whoever he is. Is he an OC or someone we all know and "love" to hate? An old friend gone bad? Or an old enemy? Hmm... Maybe the kids'll take him down... XD
| Zelda Ray chapter 19 . 8/5
Love it you need to post the next chapter soon I'm living in suspense!
| lifelovelaugh chapter 19 . 8/5
Wowww im inlove with this story and tony and harry r just perfect together I cant wait for more 3 can u make harry the uke/bottom in the sex scenes though pleaseeee
| SoulMore chapter 19 . 8/5