Reviews for Lost Innocence |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well done and very sad. |
![]() ![]() I realy like your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a note : "Please, leave me alone" will be "Pozhaluysta, ostav'te menya v pokoye" You forgot the preposition "v". Lovely one otherwise! They really make good friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know. I find myself coming back to this little gem often, as I enjoy it so. You write very well, Janto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this was a wonderful first! Nice followup, so well told and an insightful look at both agents. |
![]() ![]() First story?! Very nicely done. Definitely have a good sense of "our boys". |
![]() ![]() ![]() First MFU story, maybe, but you know our guys. Welcome to this side of the universe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A a favorite recurring theme in MFU fanfiction. Illya gets drunk, reveals snippets of his past, Napoleon sits vigil. Nice variation on the theme. |