|Reviews for Unexpected love life of dusk shine reboot no need for meme|
| Sheeta chapter 5 . 5/27
I really like where this is going!I would really like to know if you ever going to get in the first chapter the whole thing repeats itself and I really think you should fix up the wonderful work!
| nekopara chapter 4 . 1/6/2017
please continue !
| SuperGodzilla2015 chapter 4 . 3/19/2015
When is the next one?
| rinpup14 chapter 3 . 2/10/2015
luv it cant wait 4 more
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/14/2014
Keep the story going
| Dream Dragoness chapter 3 . 10/11/2014
Ok. This is by far the worst chapter structure-wise. You have so many grammar errors, it's not even funny. You've also have a lot of spelling errors, us as using 'pnyfeathers' instead of pony feathers.
Also, PLEASE put in a line break between scenes. It's hard enough to follow as it is. And separate the dialogue from the paragraphs so that it is easier for readers to read.
Other than that, good job.
| Kid Revenger chapter 3 . 10/11/2014
So far, so good. You tell the story well.
Though, you may want to get it proofread. Some sentences kinda got confusing.
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/11/2014
I don't need the comic since I can read this. Keep up your work
| Cthulhu Dingo chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Did my review go through or did I already write it?
| Stretchy-Rat chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
Great start, please continue.
| Dream Dragoness chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
| First chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
Great job on this chapter. Liking all the interactions Dusk has with each of the gals. Curious of whats going to happen when you reach the Ticketmaster episode but I have my guesses. Anyways, can't wait to read the next chapter and hope you do an awesome job like you did this chapter.