Reviews for The Leader |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Need a new chapter! Who took the Skeeter's will the baby be ok? Is Dumbledore involved? I need answers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh so very sorry for your loss. It is amazing that your still writing. But it's good that you can find a little relief by entertaining all of us who can't write. But we can read and you all ways leave us very entertained. Again so very sorry for all of your losses. Looking forward to another chapter, but am going to pick another of your stories to play catch up with. Sincerely loving your work. |
![]() ![]() Love your stories can’t wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ah lying fucker of an author who steals text from others and posts gushing fake reviews to glorize their own works nothing but a fraud |
![]() ![]() ![]() He could just claim to be Severus' son. Duh |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it and i really hope Irene and her family are found safely soon |
![]() ![]() Thank you for this story. We are sorry to hear about the loss of your family members. All i can say is Remember the happy times you you had with them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for more on this story! Thank you for writing! I appreciate that you haven't given up on it. I had read it about a year ago and then I noticed it had been updated. I will keep checking back in for more updates. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm all caught up. I purposely waited til you had more chapters and I'm happy I did. I got to read 5. I really like the story and I still love all the characters you have done in this story. You have been writing this story a long time hopefully it won't be as long as "The Contract". I reread the entire story and found more things I missed the 1st time around. How will Voldemort meet his end? Will Dumbledore lose his magic and go to the secret prison? Will Draco become a loyal servant to Harry for giving back his arm and his life? Only time will tell. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter or 2. Take care and be safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao particular Lestrange, particularly strange? I can't be the only one who found thus funny! Any way I love this plot with the Hit Wizards and how they seem to be unconnected to the sides. I'm like 20% sure I know who sent them which is nice because usually when writers try to incorporate an unknown party it's mostly obvious who they are. |
![]() ![]() this would be sooooooooooooooooo much better if it wasn't a M/M story... don't get me wrong, i have absolutely NOTHING against same sex relationships, but I have NEVER LIKED the HP/SS romances YUCK |
![]() ![]() ![]() hello Deb's,. I have no way of knowing if you remember the old retired xx English teacher who once reviewed you earlier stories but I am finally back. you have a wonderful story/tour de force here You story line is. coherent. and we'll planet out . The story is rivitating and very fascinating. there are only a couple of small errors that your betas have not caught. one is in you use of tensed the pattern of. using the proper tense cannot be ignored. PRESENT. sit. Past sat. FUTURE will sit. Never use the past of sat if a person is still sitting. CAROL LÀYLAND (AKA)clayva85 bmail l |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry for your loss. I really enjoy your story and when you are ready I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() There is not much to say. What can be said when losing the ones we love. Just a hug, and my prayers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() my condolences to you and your family. May your brothers find. |