|Reviews for The Leader|
| Makurayami Ookami chapter 61 . 9/13
This was awesome.
| Makurayami Ookami chapter 60 . 9/13
This was good
| Minna cross chapter 61 . 9/8
Amazing! I cant wait to read the next chapter.
| foxee-chik chapter 61 . 9/5
wow! keep goin! i liked it! i cant w8 2 read the nxt chap!
| fan girl 666 chapter 61 . 8/29
i'm not sure who I found more terrifying in this chapter Greyback or Harry
| xxxLeanniexxx chapter 61 . 8/28
Lockhart deserves that and more!
| excessivelyperky chapter 22 . 8/22
Good chapter-now, Remus has a right to be angry since Greyback was the one who turned him while Remus was only a child, but he's totally outclassed. (and I suspect part of Remus is jealous of Greyback for having a child).
If Severus is so powerful that Greyback is aware of it, how powerful will he be as a vampire? Then again, Harry will need someone that powerful to be a true mate anyway. Callahan is *so* toast, if Harry is going to wait till Snape is up to speed to deal with him.
| sjrodgers23 chapter 61 . 8/22
More of this story please thank you
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/21
Ok I'll be
| priestessedgecombe chapter 61 . 8/18
Okay, well, that was just … gruesome... and very graphic. He deserved every bit of it. I do see a problem however. If the goblins don't know she exists, and the ministry doesn't know (I know you wrote there was a birth certificate, but not where it came from) then how do they know she is alive to hold the money for her? Should Harry take her to Gringotts to follow-up after the news breaks about the mans gruesome death? Greyback can't do it, he is a fugitive and Harry at least has a good relationship with them.
| Jostanos chapter 61 . 8/17
What you did to Lockhart in this chapter, Debs, it was JUSTICE! Gruesome, but Justice none the less.
Hmm.. Is there anything that I would like to see before the curtain closes?
Matsuo: *raises his hands and waves it wildly* I've got one! I've got one! The 'Mot being bombarded with "Wall-to-wall ping pong balls!" (Captain Kangaroo reference)
| Jessica45395 chapter 61 . 8/16
great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next
| Severus'forbiddenlove chapter 41 . 8/15
I must say I have made it to chapter 40 and by Merlin, I spend almost all of the previous night (from 9 to 2am) reading, lets just say...you had me not wanting to go to bed. The anticipation was killing me after the plot thickened. You are talented, by far one of the better stories I have read..and I read A LOT. Do not let anyone discourage you, ever. It takes a lot to do a multi person story and you have done so thus far remarkable. I can't wait to read more.
| Corala chapter 61 . 8/15
Thank God he is gone and I hope Edith will be ok so were will put him to be find then some were good I hope
| Keyla1302 chapter 61 . 8/15
Hello!_ I am new reading your stories and let me congratulate you are very incredible. I love the plot of all your stories. I would like you to update "new twilight" as well as "Alternative Dawn" are one of my favorite stories and you left them in the most suspenseful part, please. also if you dare, I would like you to write a croosover of HP and Twilight where the dominant would be Harry and the sub would be Edward, there are not many stories with that kind of relationship between them _ _. finally, again congratulate you for the incredible stories you write.