|Reviews for Harri Potter and the Lost Shepard|
| Leicontis chapter 14 . 6/3
Okay, your depiction of scrying made me suspect you were a D&D player, but mention of Maglubyet confirms it :)
| Leicontis chapter 9 . 6/2
I have to wonder if this interpretation of goblins is inspired by or shares inspirations with Harry Crow? Even if it does, it's different enough from other versions to be distinct, which is something I always appreciate in fanfic.
| Leicontis chapter 8 . 6/2
I love how you're using Shepard in this fic - not just as the badass s/he is, but also as an advisor/mentor/confidante. Admittedly, that's partly because I did something similar in a crossover I wrote, but given the lack of Naruto fics in your Favorites list you'd likely find it incomprehensible at times. Still, Canon!Harry had a distinct lack of reliable adults to talk to, and nobody seemed to care about the ever-increasing amount of mental trauma inflicted on him, so it's deeply satisfying to see somebody actually talking with him (and the others) and helping him process things.
My one critique is that your formatting (or quite possibly ffnet's insane troll interpretation of your formatting) is a bit wonky. Paragraph breaks (as opposed to hard-returns without a gap) come seemingly at random, which makes it harder to track the flow of the story.
| Verina Du'Arden chapter 15 . 10/26/2018
Very good story, and I certainly hope you're not ending it here.
Oh... as far as EA is concerned I fully agree... and they are a bunch for greedy bastards who treat gamers like shit and care ONLY for how much money they can squeeze out of them!
| HaruhiandHikaru chapter 15 . 9/29/2018
Totally agree with you about Andromeda. Love the story so far. I can't wait to read more of it.
| SarahTaylorTam chapter 15 . 9/1/2018
this was interesting, loved luna being friends with a goblin. The last scene was an unpleasant surprise Shep deserved some freedom from them. Oh well hope you continue this at some point. Your stories are always different keep up the good work.
| Deltoren chapter 4 . 2/11/2018
All I could see in my head when hermione brought out the dildos was jontron saying “Stop!”
| fawks14 chapter 8 . 2/1/2018
Hmm, pub called "Hanged Man" in Little Hangleton? Any chance it was inspired by "Here and There"?
| bigwoof chapter 15 . 1/22/2018
Awesome series! Very creative and interesting! Waiting eagerly for the next chapters..
| Black Magic99 chapter 15 . 11/29/2017
not gonna lie, this story turned me off in the beginning since its so different from your wednesday stories but after sucking it up im glad to say im was wrong, Its odd and Shepard's OOC moments break me but its good.
Tink? really? every time it refers to shepard it breaks the story for me a little. Why Tink and not something else?
| feauxen chapter 15 . 10/26/2017
Ah, finally, a credible threat to Shepard! Honestly, that was the only thing that had been missing from this story so far. It has everything else; good characters, a realistic world, (once you accept magic and element zero) a clear plot, and enough variation in the world that not everything is predictable. And now, finally, there's something that will create real tension in an all-out fight against Shepard.
| Quintain Apprentince of Alduin chapter 15 . 10/10/2017
Did... Did Voldemort just summon a Reaper!?
| Quintain Apprentince of Alduin chapter 6 . 10/10/2017
Mordin's ghost floats in.
"I am the very model of a scientist Salarian! I've studied species turian, asari and batarian! Du du du du du du du du du du du du du du du..."
| Morbious20 chapter 15 . 8/8/2017
Awesome chapter and story so far .
| Difdi chapter 15 . 7/17/2017
Oh dear, was that a damaged Reaper and husks? Or worse, one of the guys that created both?