panic-cum-control room?!

Talk about a neat little forgotten story. Harry and luna as Sheppard grandparents. That is pretty funny and with Harry female and falling for ginny. Amusing.

Okay, your depiction of scrying made me suspect you were a D&D player, but mention of Maglubyet confirms it :)

I have to wonder if this interpretation of goblins is inspired by or shares inspirations with Harry Crow? Even if it does, it's different enough from other versions to be distinct, which is something I always appreciate in fanfic.

I love how you're using Shepard in this fic - not just as the badass s/he is, but also as an advisor/mentor/confidante. Admittedly, that's partly because I did something similar in a crossover I wrote, but given the lack of Naruto fics in your Favorites list you'd likely find it incomprehensible at times. Still, Canon!Harry had a distinct lack of reliable adults to talk to, and nobody seemed to care about the ever-increasing amount of mental trauma inflicted on him, so it's deeply satisfying to see somebody actually talking with him (and the others) and helping him process things.

My one critique is that your formatting (or quite possibly ffnet's insane troll interpretation of your formatting) is a bit wonky. Paragraph breaks (as opposed to hard-returns without a gap) come seemingly at random, which makes it harder to track the flow of the story.

Very good story, and I certainly hope you're not ending it here.

Oh... as far as EA is concerned I fully agree... and they are a bunch for greedy bastards who treat gamers like shit and care ONLY for how much money they can squeeze out of them!

Totally agree with you about Andromeda. Love the story so far. I can't wait to read more of it.

this was interesting, loved luna being friends with a goblin. The last scene was an unpleasant surprise Shep deserved some freedom from them. Oh well hope you continue this at some point. Your stories are always different keep up the good work.

All I could see in my head when hermione brought out the dildos was jontron saying “Stop!”

Hmm, pub called "Hanged Man" in Little Hangleton? Any chance it was inspired by "Here and There"?

Awesome series! Very creative and interesting! Waiting eagerly for the next chapters..

not gonna lie, this story turned me off in the beginning since its so different from your wednesday stories but after sucking it up im glad to say im was wrong, Its odd and Shepard's OOC moments break me but its good.

Tink? really? every time it refers to shepard it breaks the story for me a little. Why Tink and not something else?

Ah, finally, a credible threat to Shepard! Honestly, that was the only thing that had been missing from this story so far. It has everything else; good characters, a realistic world, (once you accept magic and element zero) a clear plot, and enough variation in the world that not everything is predictable. And now, finally, there's something that will create real tension in an all-out fight against Shepard.

Perfect!

Did... Did Voldemort just summon a Reaper!?

Mordin's ghost floats in.

"I am the very model of a scientist Salarian! I've studied species turian, asari and batarian! Du du du du du du du du du du du du du du du..."