Reviews for LOVE'S QUEST
Iliya chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
O So beautiful and touching at the same time. ]
Vitamin R.A.C.H chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
Nice poem...wayy better than my poetry!
oneandoneis37 chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
i think this poem was really beautiful and true... i loved how the first two lines seemingly to jump out at you...it's just a very touched n beautiful poem
mysticwolfguardian chapter 1 . 9/27/2003
you one of my most admired writers on ! your stories are so good! _ i especially like Once and Again. I hope things get better for you financially. I once read this quote " Life is like a wheel with 2 sides. The bottom side negative points in life, top positive points in life, and what keeps people from jumping off a cliff when their at the bottom of thier wheel is that sooner or later they will get to the top again right?" i dunno why i just said that,it just popped out of nowhere. Well as soon as you have time to write the next chapter of Once and Again i will be there waiting! The poem is so beautiful _ you have sso much potential liek you once said to me. Continue writing you have lots and lots and lots of talent! _ I just wrote this new story called Dear Betrothed, I Hate You, i was wondering if it was okay, can you check it out and tell me if its good or not? no one gives useful critiques anymore. Thanks again

Michelle

Mysticwolfguardian
Tokyo-Sama chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
YAY! - Really pretty! I like it
Hawk Niag chapter 1 . 3/30/2003
I like the last two lines. Great poem! Though sad, too true...
Blueraingurl chapter 2 . 12/14/2002
WOW!- I havent had time to read fanfics for a while- but finally my finals are over :P YES!

-imagine my suprise, you know how fanfic has a new offer the REVIEW HISTORY- and my review to this piece was highlighted in green! so i came to check it to see if you updated a new poem, but it was thank you note to me! _

I am really thankful to you too. so keep writing, and i know the thing about reviews can be minimal, but keep writing, it doesn't matter if people review or not as long as you continue to express yourself and along the way someone will appreciate your work even though you might not know it! And it's a great way to improve and gather your thoughts so please continue writing.

And thanks once again for your sweet memo- oh and i understand now what you meant by “LEAVING AND BELIEVING” ... _
baka deshi chapter 1 . 12/3/2002
Not a bad poem, although there's not really much that makes it specifically Kagome-it could also be Sango from my POV (or anybody in their situation :D) Very smooth though, I could almost hear music to it _

Keep writing!

Ps. Oh, noticed your ALL CAPS thank you to somebody else who reviewed-dying for reviews over much? *grins* I know the feeling-nobody ever wants to take a chance on poem fic :P
opal eyes chapter 2 . 12/3/2002
that was a very beautiful poem. i hope you've gotten over your broken heart by now.
Blueraingurl chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
i really like your line, "Why does happiness fade so fast? why does loneliness stay to last"

it's really true! the line screams out to me... but mostly i think happiness fades faster because we sometimes tend to forget everything when we are happy- but when we are lonely we look at everything in a negative way so it feels like you were never happy in the first place

What did you mean by, "Dont know how much it will hurt when i leave, but i have to decide and just believe" does this mean Kagome is deciding to leave? no that would be sad because Inu-yasha is sort of dense- _ she needs to kiss him to make him realize she likes him! keke

well, best wishes. Ja