|Reviews for Happy tree friends: Tainted souls|
| arshaem01gmail.com chapter 1 . 7/25/2015
| AmeliaDry chapter 3 . 6/19/2014
It's a very nice story for your first fanfic.
It's an interesting read, and along with that, it has a great plot too.
Keep it up. :)
| Azofeifa chapter 2 . 6/12/2014
Main complaint, a 'master assassin' wouldn't really bother with some lowly gangbangers unless the employer offered a ridiculous amount of money for it, or he had a personal reason, like just blowing off steam.
Keep that in mind.
| Flaky2.0 chapter 3 . 6/8/2014
Okay where to let the fun brutality begin...
I am kidding this isnt too bad, except for minor grammer issues...
Saying you instead of your and a couple others ... ( Read and reviewing all three chapters you have in one) so I would re-read the parts if you want detailed on all of them, but near miniscule compared to overall effect.
Not too bad on the idea giving some originality to a couple characters gives it a little twist and actually makes people have to actually take in context clues to know exactly who you are talking about which does ensure people to focus.
The professional hitman thing for Flippy slighty fresh, but is obvious he could easily be one so jury is still out if this is a compliment or critique, and the feel of the story does kind of show the more sane side of his condition, but a little ooc unless the crazed flipped killer is the only side of Flippy for the story and actually showing some restraint from just killing any and all... It stll is a bit ooc but shows not all mass serial killers have a bloodlust.
Sorry for the slightly long review but I decided on the side when not writing stories myself I will try to be more of a critique...
A major shortened critique...
Overall good just watch the minor grammer mistakes and dont stress yourself out with writing.
Enjoy and I do hope this is something you wanted that would help a little.
| Angel-that-saves-17 chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
This quite good! :3
I hope that you will keep it up! :D