Reviews for A Roxbury Garden
Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
No offense but I'm completely lost in this story. I has no idea what was happening after that first scene played out.
Evra7 chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
Part of me is amazed and part of me is appalled. I'm not sure how to feel about it, because it's sort of hard to follow. I think I have the general gist of it, but I still can't help but feel like Edward is sort of abusive. I'm sorry if you didn't mean to give that kind of vibe. You know what, I liked it. It was powerful, which is what I imagine you set out to do.
rpavlat chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
Totally lost..not sure what happened at all.
lola-cullen-salvatore chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
What the he'll just happened, I think I'm more lost now than when I started reading. There are a lot of things unanswered. This story is very confusing
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
I hope that doesn't count as a HEA ending! I don't understand the story.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
This is awful and annoying. Stories that provide no background are dumb. I will no longer read any more of this. You gave no background for setting, time period, characterization, or anything. How pointless. Take some writing classes and try again
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
This makes no sense. Congratulations
twilightstuff chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Very powerful story. Hope you keep writing.
Had2BU110913 chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
Not to offend you but I don't understand the story much cause of the weird grammar. I mean like you to 'ye', streaming to streamin' , walking to walkin', etc. Can't you just complete the words so I would understand the story like any other story would be like and use the commonly used words and not 'ye'? It makes me feel like I'm in the medieval times or I'm talking to an Irish person. Not that I have anything against Irish people. It's just their way of speaking confuses me
left in bits chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
wow, this was pretty damn powerful. I love the "flash" of this. while I did want to know more it didn't completely phase me. The writing style and voice, too, really worked here. I just really liked this. Wouldn'tmindmore.