|Reviews for 1st of May|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/6
Hot! Not a pair im used to reading about, but very hot. Just one tiny typo: you're instead of your, when Ino comments on Chouji's um. Ajem.
| Hellome chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
This was amazingly written and undeniably hot
| YungHime chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Bravo Bravo, yes cheers to you because this was hot!